Title

Dr Doom

by THISguy
Storyline Intergalactic Garage Sale
Characters Doctor Doom Invisible Woman
Category Transformation Mind Control
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The Merchant looked up and saw Victor Von Doom looking down at him.

"Dr Doom, it's an honor to be in your presence."

 "I heard you have items of great power. And now I see you have the most feared force in the universe in a bird cage. I must have it."

"It's yours for the low, low price of eight dollars."

Doom handed the money to The Merchant and took the bird cage that held the Phoenix Force. He opened the cage fire engulfed him. When the fire died down, Doom stood a changed man. His typical green cloak was now a firey crimson. And across the chest plate of his armor was now the emblem of the Phoenix.

He could feel the power coursing through his veins. Doom knew that he was now able to do anything he wanted. And right now he wanted to defeat the Fantastic Four.

He took on the form of the Phoenix raptor and flew to the Baxter Building. He destroyed the front doors and walked into the lobby. He heard an alarm sound and soon Thing and the Human Torch were standing in front of him.

"Doom, you picked the wrong house to break into. It's clobberin time"

Doom laughed and used the power of the Phoenix to tear the two heros apart at a sub atomic level. For all intents and purposes, Ben Grimm and Johnny Storm ceased to exist.

Victor continued until he reached the ouside of Reed's lab. The walls were designed to be unbreakable. He knew Reed and Susan would be hiding inside of the lab. Doom fired a blast of energy at the wall, disintegrating it. He stepped inside and saw Richards pointing some new invention at him. Doom waved his hand, and the weapon disappeared.

"Victor, I'm not sure how you got these new powers, but I'm going to stop you."

"Richards, you'll do no such thing."

Doom waved his hand again, and bands of energy wrapped around Mr Fantastic, rendering him helpless. He then turned his attention to the Invisible Woman.

"Susan, finally, you are going to be mine. I'm going to make your husband watch as I defile you."

"Doom, you're never going to get away with this."

Susan fired a force bubble at Doom. He simply looked at it and the force field faded.

"Susan my dear, you have no idea how powerful I have become. I joined with the Phoenix Force. I can literally do anything I want to anyone I want. Why just minutes ago, I tore your brother and the Thing apart at a sub molecular level. I undid their very atomic structure. I can assure you their deaths were swift, but extremely painful."

Tears started to stream down Sue's face, "Doom you're a monster."

"You won't think so in a minute."

Doom used his newfound telepathy to rewrite Sue's mind. From this moment on, her entire life would be devoted to serving him in every way possible. She would be his submissive queen.

"I'm so sorry for calling you a monster, Dr Doom.... I mean Master. They deserved to die for standing in your way. Now please fuck me while my pathetic husband watches. I want to watch his spirit break while we fuck."

Sue peeled off her skintight uniform and got down on her hands and knees with her eyes locked on her husband. Doom dropped his pants and positioned himself behind Susan, his eyes also aimed squarely at Mr Fantastic.

"Please Master, I want to feel you inside of me. I want you to fuck my slutty brains out while my husband dies inside watching."

Doom slid his dick into her waiting hole. Sue cried out in orgasmic bliss when she felt him penetrate her. Reed tried to close his eyes, but Doom wouldn't let him. He was forced to watch his beloved bride taken from behind by his greatest enemy.

By the time Doom came inside of Sue's cunt, Richards was a completely broken man. He was relieved when he realized that Doom was going to put him out of his misery. Doom raised his hand in Reed's direction. Reed was stunned when he saw his wife move in between himself and Doom.

"Please don't kill my husband."

Reed's eyes lit up with hope at the thought that his wife was able to fight Victor's control. But then she turned toward him and he saw the pure hatred in her gaze.

"If it's OK with you Master, I'd like to kill him myself."

Doom nodded and stepped back. Reed could feel a sharp pain in his chest. It took the smartest man alive a minute to figure out what was happening. Sue had formed a force field inside of his heart. She was literally going to break his heart. The pain increased to unbearable proportions as the force field slowly grew. Right before his heart exploded, he saw a wicked smile form on his wife's face. She walked over to Doom. The last sight Reed Richards would ever see was his wife kissing Doom.


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gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.
Grimmer - 4/17/2014 2:53 PM
A great chapter C. King! Expect a She Hulk chapter from me today and maybe one continuing either the Circe/Catwoman/Amora option or Poison Ivy.
Gorel - 4/16/2014 9:56 PM
No worries Gothamalleyviper, late night sugar binges are good muses for writing.



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