...about herself, BEA approved Version.

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ... like turning John Crichton into hers.

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Grayza decided to stack the deck by modifying herself and her situation so she could have the advantage in any encounter with Crichton or anyone else, as well as correct any aspects of herself she didn't like. Deciding it was time to test out the aspect of the ring by writing out a new truth. So she went to her computer and access the private logs before she began to write out the new existance she had decided on.

Mele-on Grayza did not get a Heppel Oil Gland, but a rare unique gland which implanted in her. It altered her breasts so they would lactate as she wished. It also altered the milk so it had the same effect as Heppel Oil Gland, but it works on both males and females. It also makes the person who drinks the milk suggestable, with suggestions outlasting the duration of the milk's power. The gland also lengthened the life and youth of Mele-on so she looks young and beautiful into her old age... which could be five hundred years at least.

Mele-on instantly knows any changes in the reality/truth as well as the past version. There is no negative effects on her mind. She also as complete knowledge of Earth and it's culture, science and all other data. Including the same knowledge as John Crichton.

As she finished, she could feel herself change... including her breasts enlarging. She remembered the side effects of the new gland which had been created by a scientist in her debt, large breasts. However, this still only helped to increase her power by distracting men with her 42 EE Breasts. It also made it easier to deliver her milk, by using the fetish for large breasts most men seemed to have. Which was why she was so high in power, only within shooting range of holding supreme command of the Peacekeepers. Having a 'larger' set of weapons... she had to hunt and/or bait her prey.

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Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in

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