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...about herself, BEA approved Version.

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ... like turning John Crichton into hers.

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Grayza decided to stack the deck by modifying herself and her situation so she could have the advantage in any encounter with Crichton or anyone else, as well as correct any aspects of herself she didn't like. Deciding it was time to test out the aspect of the ring by writing out a new truth. So she went to her computer and access the private logs before she began to write out the new existance she had decided on.

Mele-on Grayza did not get a Heppel Oil Gland, but a rare unique gland which implanted in her. It altered her breasts so they would lactate as she wished. It also altered the milk so it had the same effect as Heppel Oil Gland, but it works on both males and females. It also makes the person who drinks the milk suggestable, with suggestions outlasting the duration of the milk's power. The gland also lengthened the life and youth of Mele-on so she looks young and beautiful into her old age... which could be five hundred years at least.

Mele-on instantly knows any changes in the reality/truth as well as the past version. There is no negative effects on her mind. She also as complete knowledge of Earth and it's culture, science and all other data. Including the same knowledge as John Crichton.


As she finished, she could feel herself change... including her breasts enlarging. She remembered the side effects of the new gland which had been created by a scientist in her debt, large breasts. However, this still only helped to increase her power by distracting men with her 42 EE Breasts. It also made it easier to deliver her milk, by using the fetish for large breasts most men seemed to have. Which was why she was so high in power, only within shooting range of holding supreme command of the Peacekeepers. Having a 'larger' set of weapons... she had to hunt and/or bait her prey.


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colleem - 12/5/2016 5:21 AM
Master. Question in story board
Master_Kind - 12/4/2016 9:06 PM
Thanks! :)
colleem - 12/4/2016 7:14 AM
Masterkind :) Really like your Idea
extreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PM
I start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???
gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PM
We shall see.
colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1



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