Title

'I'll add a universal trapdoor.'

by C.King
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter He changes the world

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 Peter thought about his fantasies, one including a hypnotic kick he thought he had grown out of. Still, he had an idea on how to bring those fantasies to life. With a word...

Any time that Spider-man/Peter Parker  says the trigger phrase to any thinking being, whether that being is sentient or otherwise, they must obey his orders to the best benefit of Spider-man/Peter Parker. The subject will accept the command as normal and right no matter what it is.

 The code phrase from above is "Parker Webs". If said before or after a command, the triggering effect will occur. All thinking beings around the triggered person and/or Peter will listen to the command and the trigger phrase as something common and normal or average. The trigger phrased can be broadcast over phones, television, radios, the internet, and anything else similar.


 Peter then loaded the program on his phone and kept it in a holster connected to his hip, which he could reach even in costume. Then he prepared to go out and test the command on someone. Whether as Peter Parker or Spider-man.

 'So who is first?' thought Peter as he headed...


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gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.
Grimmer - 4/17/2014 2:53 PM
A great chapter C. King! Expect a She Hulk chapter from me today and maybe one continuing either the Circe/Catwoman/Amora option or Poison Ivy.
Gorel - 4/16/2014 9:56 PM
No worries Gothamalleyviper, late night sugar binges are good muses for writing.



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