Title

'I'll add a universal trapdoor.'

by C.King
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter He changes the world

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 Peter thought about his fantasies, one including a hypnotic kick he thought he had grown out of. Still, he had an idea on how to bring those fantasies to life. With a word...

Any time that Spider-man/Peter Parker  says the trigger phrase to any thinking being, whether that being is sentient or otherwise, they must obey his orders to the best benefit of Spider-man/Peter Parker. The subject will accept the command as normal and right no matter what it is.

 The code phrase from above is "Parker Webs". If said before or after a command, the triggering effect will occur. All thinking beings around the triggered person and/or Peter will listen to the command and the trigger phrase as something common and normal or average. The trigger phrased can be broadcast over phones, television, radios, the internet, and anything else similar.


 Peter then loaded the program on his phone and kept it in a holster connected to his hip, which he could reach even in costume. Then he prepared to go out and test the command on someone. Whether as Peter Parker or Spider-man.

 'So who is first?' thought Peter as he headed...


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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