Title

Things get hot at the Enchantment Gentleman's Club

by abashful1
Storyline Rise of Roberta
Characters Fantastic Four
Category Marvel Mind Control
Previous Chapter Reed is angry but forgives Roberta

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Suzy strutted into the Yancy Street strip bar known as Enchantment Gentlemen’s Club like she owned the place.  In many ways, she did!  It was her money that Sly used to buy it and ‘grease the wheels’ of local government to get the place open in less than a week.  It was her man Sly who was the official owner.  Best of all she was the showcase star of the place even if she was billed as the Sensational Stormy instead of her real name. 

 

Today was a big day at the new establishment.  It was only three days after the grand opening and Suzy had a new feature dancer for the place.  Angelica Jones, the Avenger heroine known as Firestar, was bursting with enthusiastic energy as she strode purposefully alongside her mentor into her new place of business.  She was dressed in a hot little number that Suzy had help her pick out.  A very short faded blue denim micro mini was the only thing covering her bare ass and snatch, or at least trying valiantly to do so on the hot bitch. Her heaving breasts were tightly bound by a deep bright yellow lycra crossover halter top that accentuated her rock hard nipples as her lovely boobs danced erotically with every step. Three inch diameter hoop rings adorned her lovely ears and caught the track lighting in the entry hall as they swung to and fro; their glints and flashes brought the attention to the beautiful young woman’s face, brightly painted with teal eye shadow and deep burgundy glossy lipstick.  She was dressed for success at her new job.  She was a stripper here at Enchantment, but that was just to advertise for her real job.  Every girl here was a hooker and so was she; she just was a top shelf model for the trusted high rollers at the Fantastic Whores brothel, just like her mentor Aunty Suzy!

 

Robin 6 was carefully monitoring the patrons as they paid for entrance.  For the high rollers, she would be sure to tell them to look for her sisters (of which there were 3) working in the Fantasia Lounge for the elite customers.  For the less wealthy or trustworthy, there is the huge 40,000 square foot Sinsations Theatre where the street hookers strut their stuff.  Strangely, the men that were talking with Robin 6 when the sexy strippers walked in just smiled happily and walked out without entering either room.  Angelica blurted out in surprise “Hey guys, where you going?  The party is just starting!”

 

The gorgeous AI laughed “Don’t waste your time sweetie.  They’re cops looking to make a bust. I used some of my telepathy on them to think they spent a couple hours here and checked every nook and cranny. They are gonna give us a *clean* bill of health to their boss, who just happens to be a ‘friend’ of Suzy’s.  That ought to keep the boys in blue out of here for at least a month.”  The slutty drone checked the heroine out from head to toe before she continued “So you’re the new hire?  You really are hot stuff.”

 

Angelica smiled broadly as she fluffed her hair and cooed “Gee, thanks lady.  I think you’re pretty hot yourself!"

 

Robin smiled wickedly and replied “You bet your ass I am.  My snatch draws almost as much dough as Stormy!  But that wasn’t what I meant.  Your stage name is Hot Stuff.  Whether you’re strutting your stuff here or riding cocks and Fantastic Whores, that’s your name.  Just remember rule number 1;keep the job and personal life *separate*!  That goes double for Avenger shit, got it?”

 

As Angelica nodded her head enthusiastically, Suzy and Robin shared a knowing smile. Angelica quickly applied the skin-like plastic patches Robin provided behind her ears as instructed and both women knew that Firestar’s fate was sealed.  The patches were nanotech dura-patches that quickly adapted to their host’s skin texture and color as they permanently sealed themselves to her.  The nanotech would protect her from the mind control devises and subliminals constantly being pumped to the customers to guarantee their discretion and loyalty.  In fact they would also harden the heroine’s mind from almost any other telepathic or hypnotic intrusion which would be quite helpful to her, but even that was secondary to its true purpose.  The patches allowed Suzy (through the Mento-Intesifier) and Robin direct and unopposed telepathic control of all the whores as well as enforced the foundation of laws they existed by:

1) They are, to the very core of their beings, the willing slaves of Sly Willie and Suzy Storm

2) They are whores and obey their pimps, but their pimps are slaves to Sly Willie now too

3) Above all else, they love who they are now as slaves and whores and will do or sacrifice *anything* to protect their masters and to remain slaves/whores.

 

Suzy pussy oozed with cum as the young heroine’s she accepted what she was now.  Hot Stuff was just another slave whore; a sexy piece of cock candy to be rented out at will.  For 2 12 hour shifts a week she will strip and fuck as she was meant to do, but the rest of the time she would be the ‘pure and selfless’ heroine she used to be.  No one would ever know the secret and that made Suzy very, very hot and bothered.

 

As the slutty former heroine licked her parched lips, a deep familiar voice came up from behind her “So this is my new bitch?”  Suzy and Hot Stuff turned to face Sly.  Hot Stuff looked at her master with unrestrained desire and awe, but Suzy’s attention was equally drawn to the two men standing behind him. They were Sinsation’s regulars, too poor to be her customers normally, but they were something she needed right now.  As Sly growled “Come on Hot Stuff!  Time for me to lay down the law!” Suzy knew that he was going to give the young heroine the fucking of a lifetime.  He was the pimp and he fucked all his hos.  He was still going to give it to her 3 times as hard tonight like he has ever day and night since she gave herself fully to him because she wasn’t just his whore.  Suzy was his old lady and Sly was even more obsessed with her than she was with him.  Of course, the pimp knew his woman as well as she knew him.  He could see her staring at the men behind him.  As he guided his new slut to his office he smiled a growled “Do what you gotta do ‘Stormy’.  I want you ready and on stage in 2 hours!”  In his earpiece, he heard Robin 6 report that her scanners showed the gentlemen had enough money for 2 hours of ‘anything goes’ with the whore so he corrected himself “But for these guys, I’ll give you an extra 15 minutes to get ready after you’re done with them.”

 

Juan and Brett couldn’t believe their luck.  The two regulars had each enjoyed the intimate, if illegal, company of a couple of the cuter babes in the Sinsations Theatre before, but this was the top of the line show babe of the whole place! They would each give a kidney to have her, let alone for a couple hours.  As Suzy put a cigarette to her ruby red lips, Brett practically fell all over himself to get his Bic up to light her smoke. 

 

Suzy knew the two men were her just horny toys to play with now and Sly’s comment on his way out was all she needed to hear to know how much they had for the fun she needed. As she blew a thick creamy cloud into the air, her would be suitors vied for position.  The sultry vixen purred “So Sly tells me I have some time to kill and you guys are good for a little recreation.  I get $500 an hour for an ‘Anything Goes’ party.  I’ll even spot you two for one on the price so what do you say, boys?”  The men moved as if possessed.  Both presented Robin with credit cards that had, between them, the required $1,000.  As Robin indicated the room that Suzy could use to entertain her fans, a dismissive wave of the harlot’s hand brought a sly grin to the android’s face. Suzy purred as she led her prey to the back exit “No thanks, babe.  I have something special in mind for these boys!"

 

Brett and Juan were a bit confused.  They were expecting to be brought to a high roller suite or at least a nice fetish room, not the alley behind the huge building housing the Enchantment Gentlemen’s Club.  Suzy chuckled wickedly as she purred to the men “Don’t worry, studs, This is going to blow your minds!  There is nothing like the danger of being seen to make a hot piece of ass really work it like a pro; trust me on that!  Her rings extended their power to the alley and anyone in sight.  Soon a hologram of an unpopulated alley covered the area as well as the telepathic illusion to cover any noise or other impression that anything out of the ordinary was going on. Her lovers were also caught in the power of the Mento- Intensifier as all hesitation was removed.  Of course this was going to be so nasty and hot fucking this incredible babe in the open like a common crack ho.  They couldn’t wait to get started.

 

Soon Suzy was back in her favorite sex hazed nirvana as two meaty cocks pounded her fuck holes with abandon! She loved everything about her life now, but getting down and dirty on the street was still her favorite thing as a hooker; well, next to worshipping her love God, Sly!  She was getting paid to fuck like an alley cat.  It didn’t matter how much she was paid, just that she was getting money to give her baby while these men treated her like the filthy, slutty, low life, cock hungry trollop she was to the core of her being.  Orgasm after orgasm shook her soul as she reveled in her divine depravity.  The lower her decency plummeted, the more pride in herself and her abilities she felt.  She loved being such a deliciously amoral skank!  Nothing was beneath her now. 

 

The fuck fest went on and on, but her clients were certainly not the mighty Sly! After 45 minutes, they began to tire and she had to use her rings to revive their carnal fury.  After 80 minutes, even the rings were not enough to keep the poor bastards going.  By then Suzy had cum more than most people do in a year, but she was still disappointed that her fun was cut short.  Still she implanted the compulsion into the men’s minds that they would be frequent customers of her ‘sister’ Suzy the street ho.  She would continue to make money off the fucked out men and through her drone she would be able to experience their attentions at will.

 

Suzy lit a cigarette as she touched the secret button on her earring to activate the communicator Roberta had given some time ago. It was one of her favorite nonsexual toys and Robin had cloned the device many times to give the slut scores of accessories to perform the same function.  With a deep sultry purr, Suzy spoke to her aide “Robin, sweetie, can you send some help to the alley.  I need someone to pick up these fucked out Johns and put them in a cab.  You might want to get them a membership at that gym Sly made a deal with.  Their spirits were willing but their asses need a bitch load more stamina!”

 

As the wanton slut enjoyed her smoke and watched two of the Robin drones pick up the unconscious men, the communicator vibrated signaling an incoming call.  Suzy smiled as her best friend’s voice greeted her “Hi Suzy!  How are you doing today?”

 

Although her voice and Robin’s was virtually identical, Suzy immediately responded “Roberta, babe!  Good to hear you voice, sweetie.  How’s my favorite robo-bitch?”

 

It galled the advanced android to be addressed so, but it also delighted her how completely the stupid bitch Susan had fallen.  In a perky voice, she replied, in terms the skank could understand, “Oh, things are marvelous here, *slut*!  *My* man has gone and *knocked me up* so he wants to make me an honest woman now.  How do you feel about going to the Caribbean for a quickie divorce on us?” 

 

Suzy burst out laughing.  Tears of mirth rolled down her cheeks as the thought of Reed putting a bun into Roberta’s oven when it occurred to her that her friend practically *was* an appliance! The slutty whore laughed so hard she thought she would choke and all through it Roberta listened in controlled silence and finally the fact that no sound whatsoever was coming from the android dawned on Suzy.  In a cautious tone, Suzy said “Um, you’re… You’re not serious, are you?  I mean... Really???” In an all too human mannerism, Roberta cleared her throat, but before she could continue, Suzy gushed in all too sincere praise “Damn girl!  You steal my husband and then trick him into being a sperm donor for some science experiment you cooked up between your legs to seal the deal?  You are one *hard core*, home wrecking bitch!  Respect to the droid baby! Respect!”

 

It took all her control not to let on her anger at the stupid whore, but Roberta accepted the ‘complements’ with grace as she replied “Thanks, Suzy.  You’re support means so much to me.  I hope this means that you will be willing to go with us to complete the divorce.  In 48 hours you could be completely free of Reed.  I’ll even make you my maid of honor in our beachside wedding.”

 

In her new mindset, Suzy didn’t hold Roberta’s lies and manipulation against her. Not only did it lead her to this wonderful life she had, it was something to be respected by the evil hooker. That being said, it didn’t matter what she thought of the bitch; when people wanted something it was time to get something and this was worth a lot to the android.  Suzy smiled evilly as she cooed in reply “Now lets not get ahead of ourselves here sweety!  I love ya like a sister but I get off on fucking around behind the nerd’s back.  It gets me all hot and wet knowing that every cock I ride is a betrayal of that sham of a marriage. Don’t get me wrong, if you want him, you can *have* him, but if you want me to give up something I like, well there has to be a little more give and take, know what I mean?”

 

The gorgeous android new exactly what the bitch meant.  She couldn’t wait to have this slut out of her life forever and she was ***so*** close to achieving it.  Roberta sighed as she asked “OK, Suzy, I guess it’s not enough that I helped you by getting you ownership of the Baxter Building, immediate & complete access to your marital financial assets, cover your illegal activities, and let’s not forget make it possible to spend most of your time with Sly while Reed still thought you were trying to work things out. No, let’s not dwell on the past.  What is it I can do for my dear friend Suzy *now*?”

 

Suzy chucked in reply “If you think you can guilt a whore, then you’ve been hanging with Reed to long already, babe. Let’s see… To start with, I want the formula and the means to make more of the perfume.  Next I want 10 more Suzy drones and 20 more Robin drones. Last, I want you to provide me with the ability to make android duplicates of *anyone* I want and add them to the Suzy collective so I can control them completely.”

 

Roberta answered “Yes to the perfume, 5 more Suzys, 10 more Robins, and hell no to the droid duping.  Just isn’t going to happen!”  But when Suzy hung up on her, she was forced to consider her options.  It appeared that the cards were in the whore’s hands.  If Roberta wanted cooperation, she was going to have to play this pathetic fools game, but was it worth it?  Couldn’t she just wait?  Reed loved her and he accepted her pregnancy.  Did it really matter of they waited for a few months for the divorce to be finalized here?  As she considered the alternatives, Roberta realized that it wouldn’t be long before Reed contacted the lawyers.  If they talked to Suzy now she might exert pressure to slow things down until she got her way.  Also there was the unknown opponent to consider.  No, waiting was not an option, at least not anymore.  This had to be completed!

 

Suzy could hear Angelica moaning in delight as Sly fucked her silly. She could hear her lover demanding obedience from his new whore between grunts and moans “You’re my bitch now, got it WHORE?  Day in, day out you act just like you did before today.  You play the heroine and you don’t let NOBODY know a fucking thing is different!  But we know it’s all different now, don’t we SLUT?  Two nights a week you are a slutty stripper.  You dance on poles, give lesbo play shows on stage, and do your fucking best to get dude to pay to fuck you.  You take the guys to the teleport pad and you rock their fuckin worlds out at the Baxter Building.  You’re a Fantastic Whore now and you fuck like a mad weasel in heat while you’re on *my* clock!”

 

Suzy enjoyed listening to her lover dominate the stupid skank and got off on how completely under their power the slutty heroine was now.  She couldn’t wait to pick a new target for the new brothel.  She smiled wickedly as she strolled behind the stage of the Fantasia Lounge.  She still had 5 minutes before she did her show on the stage.  There were at least 3 high rolling guys worth over $500,000,000 in the crowd tonight and with a little luck she would have at least one of them as regulars after tonight.  As much as she was looking forward to the night, the familiar buzzing of her earring communicator brought an even more satisfied smile to her painted lips.  The whore cooed “Roberta, back so soon?”

 

The lovely android replied coolly “I’ll make this plane.  I’ll give you what you want, but first I want you to look at the Robin drone just getting off stage.”  Suzy turned to see one of Sly’s droid helpers strutting through the curtain.  Suddenly her eyes rolled to the back of her head and the android began twitching uncontrollably.  The fit lasted exactly 30 seconds before the robot giggled stupidly and got up off the floor as if nothing had happened.  In her ear, Suzy heard Roberta continue “Another 30 seconds and she wouldn’t have recovered.  I could do that to all the Robins.  I could do it to all the Suzy’s as well.  Just think, all your help gone in just over a minute.  Even worse, imagine how it would *feel* to have the feedback from 4 Suzy drones coursing through your brain at the same time?  Not pleasant, I bet, but then again you would be a drooling vegetable by 45 seconds anyway.  So lets get down to brass tacks.  Zero Sum games are not productive and, my friend, not something I *want* to do, but make no mistake, I won’t think twice if I need to.  Do we understand each other now?”

 

Suzy was shocked but she managed to sneer back “Fuck that!  You can’t fool me.  I know that you can’t hurt the family.”

 

Roberta laughed “Suzy, sweetie, you’re a friend now.  You aren’t family anymore. But these childish and destructive games you like to play could hurt *my* family and I will do anything to prevent that.  Now, why don’t we put this mutually destructive game behind us and work together to get all that we both want?"


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