Title

Thundra needs further convincing.....

by Troglodyte
Storyline Battle of the Blondes
Characters Fantastic Four Invisible Woman Thundra
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Sue finds Thundra.

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"Susan, what are you doing?" Thundra protested weakly.

"Something I wanted to do for a long time," Sue said. "Don't tell me you haven't thought about it. Don't you find me attractive?"

"I do," Thundra admitted. "I think you are beautiful. I have from the first time I set eyes on you. But your ways are not mine. You are mated to Reed Richards. A man…."

"I'm his wife," Sue said. "Not his possession. I make my own choices. I'm not a slave. Unless you want me to be. I could be your slave, Mistress."

Thundra stared in disbelief for a long moment. Then her full red lips curled in a savage smile.

"So be it," she said. Reaching out with her powerful hands she tore Sue's robe off her body and pushed her to the cold floor.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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