Title

Roberta finds flaws in Johnny and Ben as well

by Sultan Singory
Storyline Rise of Roberta
Characters Thing Human Torch
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before she started her plan for sue , her sensors showed the other members of the team approaching

She saw Johnny and Ben entering the baxter building

Johnny and Ben , while they were part of the team we very flawed

Johnny storm is reckless and has endangered the team many times , not only that , but he is a very bad role model for the kids , not to mention he would try to defend his sister and throw a wrench in her would be perfect planning

Ben Grimm , the strong man of the team , the ex-pilot always trusted Reed and comforted the team when needed , he was the moral anchor of the team , but he was also an anchor dragging Reed down , always making him second guessing him self , always distracting him so he can find a cure

They must be dealt with


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gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)



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