Title

Ororo goes in search of her queen

by Anzaleth
Storyline Let the Music Move You
Characters Jean Gray Shadowcat Storm
Category Marvel Corruption Bondage Mind Control Female Dom
Previous Chapter They find someone else instead

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Ororo, Storm, moaned. That song, it had echoed through her soul.

Katherine was... Katherine was.... She was a goddess. Mistress was such a goddess.

Ororo trembled. How could she have ever tried to act like a mother-figure for Mistress, when Ororo wasn't even worthy to lick the woman's boots.

She needed to show Mistress how sorry she was.


* * *

"And where are you going?" the Shadow Queen asked as Jean shuffled towards the door.

"Bored. Wanna use the Net," Jean said. Because she'd already been transformed by the music before, she hadn't been affected by the new song. She still had a little girl's mind.

"I think you need to be taught a lesson. Come here!"

Jean squealed as Katherine Jean's arm and brandished her riding crop.

"Lemme go, you big meanie!" Jean squealed.

* * *

Storm moaned as she crawled down the hall on her hands and knees, naked except for a spiky dog collar. She was a slave, a beast, a bitch, Yes, her Goddess' bitch.

She'd show Mistress she could be a good bitch.


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LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 7:21 AM
Nice work, exidor455 on the new Susan Storm's Secret Life chapter. I really enjoy this storyline. Thanks for keeping it going.



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