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"Mistress, I'd like to head out again," Susan said.
"What, so soon?" Hornet Queen replied as she ground her cunt into Maria's mouth.
"I want Namor." Susan licked her lips. "I want to be riding his huge cock while Reed licks my ass and Johnny sucks my titties. I want to use Namor as a footrest and Reed as a chair. I want to suck him so hard he begs me to stop!"
"Aren't you a kinky little domme," Hornet Queen chuckled.
"Well, all right!"
"We'd like to go collect some slaves too," Iron Maiden said. "I want to break the Mandarin, show him what happens when he faces a REAL warrior."
"And I want Wolverine," X-23 said.
"Ooooo, the original licking-out the clone," Hornet Queen laughed. "Wicked!"
* * *
Meanwhile, Peter moaned, trapped in a web, as he watched She-Venom and She-Carnage writhe together.
Their long tongues wrapped around each other, like two serpents courting, and tendrils from each of their symbiotes writhed together.
"Yesss! Yesss! We love! We love!"
Peter shivered. It was terrifying and monstrous... and strangely attractive.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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