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"And while I'm at it..."
Some would have called it magic. Others, some highly complex scientific phenomenon, which Fibr knew how to manipulate. Regardless, with some gestures, Fibr shot a couple beams right into the backs of two more Avengers members standing right beside She-Hulk.
He grinned when the two women followed through on the urges sent into them, their arms crossing as they went to smack and set their palms on each other's asses, squeezing and feeling up for all they could.
"Nice ass you got there, red," Maria Hill complimented.
"Are you going to eat it out tonight, or just tease me again?" Black Widow said.
"Only if you return the favor." Maria caressed Black Widow's shapely rear, so seemingly obsessed with the feel of it that she couldn't bear to take her hand away. As far as they, and anyone else, suddenly knew about the two, this was their habit: to grope and
fondle their butts everywhere they went, exchanging playfully snide remarks all the while. In a pair of lovers this might have been expected, but in the relationship Fibr left them with...
"Can you save the pillow talk for your next date?" She-Hulk asked.
Black Widow and Maria Hill equally looked at She-Hulk with a light glare of annoyance.
"This again?" Black Widow said.
"There's nothing gay about playing with another woman's ass. Football players smack each other there all the time."
"Whatever," She-Hulk said, "can you make sure our next fight includes one man with a big cock? The last one was so small I couldn't even feel it inside me."
"That's not something you want to tell people," Black Widow warned her suddenly, strangely cock-hungry teammate.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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