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Felicia Hardy blinked and leaned back in her overstuffed chaired.
She stared down at her outfit, the expensive black pantsuit trimmed with fur, covering a large body of rippling muscle. She whipped out her compact and stared at her face: it looks like her, though a little thicker, a little rougher, and her white hair was
pulled into a ponytail and came to a widow's peak at the front.
She needed to do something! She couldn't be like this!
She stared to frantically type on the computer. She had to -- do what? She was richer than God now! More powerful than anything! She was strong, fast, in charge!
"Ms. Hardy, ma'am?"
Felicia looked up at the two women who clicked into the room on their stiletto heels. One was svelte with an exaggerated hourglass body and long brown hair -- that came to a widow's peak, while the other was large -- plump in the cutest, sexiest way, with short
black hair. Both had huge tits and were dressed in tight blazers, miniskirts, and heels: the right combination of slutty and formal for the best sexretaries.
"Is everything all right, ma'am?"
Felicia looked at Wilma Fisk and Norma Osborn, the two bimbos who handled all her dictation.
"Yeah," Felicia finally said as she lit a cigar. "Everything is perfect, girls."
* * *
"Mmmm, dat's good," Luke Cage said as he took a puff of the blunt.
Mary-J giggled and ran her nails along Luke's lap,, the huge bulge straining against his jeans. He was massive! Much bigger than Peter's. A huge black python of a cock....
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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