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Mammy America squeaked and took a step back as the truck drove up beside her. It was filled with a bunch of muscular young white rednecks.
"That's some pair of titties you got."
Mammy blushed and tried to cover them. As Captain America, she wouldn't have been bothered by these jerks, but now....
"You need a ride?" they asked and two got out of the truck.
* * *
"There's a couple of people here to see you, a Mr. Stark and a Mr. Williams."
Wanda licked her lips. She knew what she'd do with Simon Williams, making him the second of her two butlers. Vision and Wonder Woman walking around, their huge cocks stretching against their tuxedos... delicious. Wasn't sure what she'd do with Tony, but she'd
think of something.
"Show them in, Vision."
Then Wanda turned to Madame X.
"Yeah, Wanda," Charlie giggled.
"You'all want the X-Men to be happy and people to like mutants, right?"
"So when they start bothering your little ol'brain again, you send them off to your club. I'm sure they'll come real happy and the kinda mutant a whole lotta people would like."
Or add your own
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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