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Someone builts a L (Love, Lust, Compassion)-Ray based on technology from the Hate-monger's H (Hate, Fear and so on) Ray.

by C.King
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Characters Absolutely Everyone
Category Marvel and DC Mind Control Marvel
Previous Chapter Love

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 The young teen had built the device after look up weird inventions and tech on the internet, as something of a hobby. There he found out about the Hate-Monger, a villain who had scientists create a Hate Ray, or H Ray, generator. The device was basically a specialized high-frequency microwave emitter which affected the parts of the brain for emotion. Causing Anger, Fear and Dread... but especially Hate. Even having the power to turn any love the subject had for anything into an equal amount of hate.

 The eighteen year old, Derrick Flint, had used the schematics which one of the scientist had posted on the net and were able to adjust them to effect different aspects of the same areas. Instead of causing, Hate, Fear and Anger. He could make more... interesting emotions. Love, Lust, Desire, Compassion. Or as he called it, the Love or L Ray.

 Testing various designs on rats and other animals, as well as trying other forms then a pistol which could get him in trouble given the climate on guns, he was able to create a projector which looked like a harmless penlight. Then he tested it out in his school... which ended with Cheerleaders dating Nerds, Goths dating Jocks and other weird love connections. Including his dating of the sexiest young woman in school... plus an affair with the hottest teacher... and a few others. He also learned when he used the device, people affected were very easy to manipulate.

 Deciding on a few fun ideas, he tried to decide on one. Like making a hot heroine fall for him, love and/or lust. Or do the same with a hot villainess. Or more then one of the above.

 He also liked the idea of playing games with the hearts of people, especially powerful people like celebrities, superhumans, community leaders and so on.

 There were also other fun things he could do with this...


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ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 6:32 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check out the message board.
colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.



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