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Someone builts a L (Love, Lust, Compassion)-Ray based on technology from the Hate-monger's H (Hate, Fear and so on) Ray.

by C.King
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Characters Absolutely Everyone
Category Marvel and DC Mind Control Marvel
Previous Chapter Love

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 The young teen had built the device after look up weird inventions and tech on the internet, as something of a hobby. There he found out about the Hate-Monger, a villain who had scientists create a Hate Ray, or H Ray, generator. The device was basically a specialized high-frequency microwave emitter which affected the parts of the brain for emotion. Causing Anger, Fear and Dread... but especially Hate. Even having the power to turn any love the subject had for anything into an equal amount of hate.

 The eighteen year old, Derrick Flint, had used the schematics which one of the scientist had posted on the net and were able to adjust them to effect different aspects of the same areas. Instead of causing, Hate, Fear and Anger. He could make more... interesting emotions. Love, Lust, Desire, Compassion. Or as he called it, the Love or L Ray.

 Testing various designs on rats and other animals, as well as trying other forms then a pistol which could get him in trouble given the climate on guns, he was able to create a projector which looked like a harmless penlight. Then he tested it out in his school... which ended with Cheerleaders dating Nerds, Goths dating Jocks and other weird love connections. Including his dating of the sexiest young woman in school... plus an affair with the hottest teacher... and a few others. He also learned when he used the device, people affected were very easy to manipulate.

 Deciding on a few fun ideas, he tried to decide on one. Like making a hot heroine fall for him, love and/or lust. Or do the same with a hot villainess. Or more then one of the above.

 He also liked the idea of playing games with the hearts of people, especially powerful people like celebrities, superhumans, community leaders and so on.

 There were also other fun things he could do with this...


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gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)



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