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Someone builts a L (Love, Lust, Compassion)-Ray based on technology from the Hate-monger's H (Hate, Fear and so on) Ray.

by C.King
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Characters Absolutely Everyone
Category Marvel and DC Mind Control Marvel
Previous Chapter Love

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 The young teen had built the device after look up weird inventions and tech on the internet, as something of a hobby. There he found out about the Hate-Monger, a villain who had scientists create a Hate Ray, or H Ray, generator. The device was basically a specialized high-frequency microwave emitter which affected the parts of the brain for emotion. Causing Anger, Fear and Dread... but especially Hate. Even having the power to turn any love the subject had for anything into an equal amount of hate.

 The eighteen year old, Derrick Flint, had used the schematics which one of the scientist had posted on the net and were able to adjust them to effect different aspects of the same areas. Instead of causing, Hate, Fear and Anger. He could make more... interesting emotions. Love, Lust, Desire, Compassion. Or as he called it, the Love or L Ray.

 Testing various designs on rats and other animals, as well as trying other forms then a pistol which could get him in trouble given the climate on guns, he was able to create a projector which looked like a harmless penlight. Then he tested it out in his school... which ended with Cheerleaders dating Nerds, Goths dating Jocks and other weird love connections. Including his dating of the sexiest young woman in school... plus an affair with the hottest teacher... and a few others. He also learned when he used the device, people affected were very easy to manipulate.

 Deciding on a few fun ideas, he tried to decide on one. Like making a hot heroine fall for him, love and/or lust. Or do the same with a hot villainess. Or more then one of the above.

 He also liked the idea of playing games with the hearts of people, especially powerful people like celebrities, superhumans, community leaders and so on.

 There were also other fun things he could do with this...


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gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.
gothamalleyviper - 12/14/2014 4:39 PM
Posted 63rd Joker, working on Rubber Queen



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