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Rick decided he couldn't wait any more, and made a few calls...
Some time later, having discovered that his status as a member of the Global Freebie List gave him free access to "premium" Super-Hooker content such as porn videos, Rick was busily watching a video depicting a "fight" between She-Hulk and the Leader, who in
this reality was his ex-wife Marlo (and who managed to somehow make the huge head look sexy), when his doorbell rang. He grinned, paused the video and went to the door.
Standing outside were Elektra Natchios and Maria Castle, both looking even hotter in person than on their website photos.
Elektra gave him a saucy grin. "You called, Rick, I came," she purred, emphasizing that last word. The Punisher took a more professional approach, shaking his hand.
"Mr. Jones," she said, in a businesslike manner. "It's an honor to service a man who has done so much for the Super-Hooker community, and the world."
"Uh, thanks," Rick responded. "Uhm, look, I know you like to do things a certain way, and I wanted to mix-it up a bit. Are you okay with that?"
Maria's expression took on a somewhat steelier cast. "Mr. Jones," she said in a much colder tone. "I assure you I AM a professional. I am quite willing to put my own tastes aside for a client as prestigious as yourself."
She was clearly annoyed at what she presumed to be an aspersion on her character. Rick immediately sought to reassure her.
"I don't doubt that, I just didn't want you to do anything that would make you uncomfortable; if you're not having a good time, how can I?"
The Punisher's expression softened. "Oh. What did you have in mind, then, sir?"
"Well, I know you like to get beaten up first. So, I figured I'd have Elektra take care of that, and then I'd join in. Is that a problem?"
Maria looked over at Elektra who smiled lasciviously; the Greek beauty was obviously turned on by the idea. Maria smiled back; obviously it turned her on as well.
"That will be fine, Mr. Jones," she said. "Shall we adjourn to your bedroom?"
Rick grinned. "Yeah, let's."
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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