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The elves were at work for their leader. They had already upload the program for their targets which would link them with one or more other targets. The main computer database on the master Kinky Ray would transfer the information into portable units.
They had to just fire the guns at the targets and the next time they saw the people program into their relationship, the ray would come into effect.
We turn to one of the elven ninjas as they approached the hotel room which was shared by the genius inventor of Pym Particles (the Reason for the Meeting with Wayne) Doctor Hank Pym, and his socialite girlfriend Janet Van Dyne. They were currently discussing
the Wayne meeting, where they had agreed for the moment to take some of the money which Bruce was offering to avoid bring the Pym particles to the market.
"I still say that Wayne is going to look for a way to weaponize my particles." said Hank, a little paranoid of the idea of his discoveries being made into weapons.
"I've know Bruce since we were little and stuck at the same stuffy social events. He's not like that. Besides, it's not anything different then what Reed does with his own inventions. Do you know how many millions he makes a year from agreements to not bring
his minor world changing discoveries to the market? Millions he uses to make more discoveries which benefit heroes everywhere.
I don't see why you can do that as well..." said Janet, before she felt a strange warming sensation on her back. She didn't notice Hank react to something as well. Hank turned to Janet, his eyes now filled with awe as he fell on his knees.
"I apologize my queen. Your humble slave doesn't know what come over him to object to your will. Punishment as you wish." answered the man before him, as Janet started to change her thinking.
"As you should be slave. Your queen must be obeyed, without question or hesitation. Fortunately for you, your queen loves her puny weak willed slave. So she will show him some mercy. You will have to give me ten orgasms to night. If I am satisfied that you
have done a good job, you are forgiven and you may cum. Otherwise you will not cum until I command it, slave."
"Yes, my beloved Queen. This slave lives to please and serve his queen."
Seeing the effects of the beam, having created a romantic dominate/submissive kink relationship, the elf left for their next mission.
Beast Boy was getting ready for some time off... being a hero. He was working by going to a sci-fi convention, for his work in his television show. To get there he needed to spend the night in a motel in Cresskill, New Jersey. Not knowing it was also the motel
of a young HYDRA created female clone of a man who was the best he was at what he was did (The same hero who was now trying to prove he was the best in other things to a certain spotted feline villainess).
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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