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Joe Lincoln was supposed to spend his 21st birthday with his girlfriend, Amber. Unfortunately, a family emergency had come up, and she'd had to leave town for a month. He was, needless to say, not entirely happy about this.
Still, the party his friends were throwing him sorta made-up for it, taking him to Heavenly Bodies, the Super-Hooker bar/brothel/stripclub where the girls were literally out of this world. He had to admit, he was having a good time. When their waitress, a sexy
Skrull girl named Lyja, heard it was their birthday, she'd seated them right in front of one of the stages, and been particularly solicitous, sitting in Joe's lap and feeding him his order, so his hands would be free to grope her. And now, the dancer, the
voluptuous blonde Moonstone, was leading him to an alcove for a private dance!
It was great, but he felt a twinge of guilt that he was doing this instead of being with Amber, such that he didn't notice that he was, in fact, being led upstairs, to the bedrooms, until he found himself inside one, and confronted with a large, comfy looking
bed, a shelf full of sextoys, and a video monitor on which appeared...
"Amber?" he said, shocked.
"Hi, baby," she said. "I'm really sorry I couldn't be with you to celebrate, so I paid for a special gift. I love you."
The monitor winked off. Moonstone smiled at her stunned client.
"Happy birthday, handsome."
(OOC: So, it's not quite as per the option, but it's close enough. Joe and Amber are original characters)
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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