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Xander stood in the alley for a minute to digest what he had. The truth hit him hard.
'This thing had to be created by Janus or some other chaos being that Ethan would worship. The thing basically re-writes reality with words or writing. To avoid changing reality would require superhuman control over your words and actions, something more mortal things with a soul could never do. So chaos occurs. Of course, you could take if it off... but chaos strikes again as you will likely loose it and someone else gets it. Which here on the ol' Hellmouth, likely means a bad guy. Big or otherwise. The only safe place is on someones finger.
The question is who's finger it should be on. Mine? Not sure. Not exactly a bad guy, but not a shining figure of virture.
Then again, no of us are. Not Buffy, Giles, Willow, or the others...
The question is who would be the person to do the least amount of damage with this thing on my finger. The lesser of all chaos, so to speak?' he thought as he made his choice to who the ring should be given to. He made the choices as he headed to the person, being...
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colleem - 3/8/2014 8:24 AM
C.King. Any Idea for the Masterplan Marvel?
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
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