Title

Not alone

by Shendude
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Ms. Marvel Spider-Man
Category Marvel M/F Mind Control Body Modification
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Peter's jaw dropped. Increasing Ms Marvel's bust-size and libido while making her totally adore him and always able to find him was one thing (well, four things), but being confronted by the reality of it was another. More significantly, while making his fantasy of Carol servicing him come true, without realizing it, he'd gone and made the other part of the fantasy true; of their being not one but five of her.

And all five were hovering in front of his window! One wore her original midriff-baring costume, another he classic black costume, a third wore her Binary costume, the fourth wore her new Captain Marvel costume, while the fifth wore street clothes. All five had had their tops destroyed by their expanding breasts, yet showed no inclination to cover up their awe-inspiring assets. "Classic" Carol knocked on the window.

"Can we come in, Pete?" she said. Peter gulped and let them in. There was an awkward silence for a moment, and then "Binary" Carol spoke up.

"We know you did this to us, Peter. Don't know how we know, or how you did it, but we know it was you."

"it's okay, though," said "Original" Carol. "We like...no, we love what you've done to us...what you've done FOR us."

Pete stared. "Seriously?"

They nodded in unison. "Seriously," said "Civilian" Carol. "It's probably a side-effect of the transformation, but I wouldn't dream of going back to the way we were before."

More nodding, and then "Captain" Carol declared, "Now that we've cleared that up, Peter, we were wondering..."


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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