Title

Roberta finds flaws in Johnny and Ben as well

by Sultan Singory
Storyline Rise of Roberta
Characters Thing Human Torch
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before she started her plan for sue , her sensors showed the other members of the team approaching

She saw Johnny and Ben entering the baxter building

Johnny and Ben , while they were part of the team we very flawed

Johnny storm is reckless and has endangered the team many times , not only that , but he is a very bad role model for the kids , not to mention he would try to defend his sister and throw a wrench in her would be perfect planning

Ben Grimm , the strong man of the team , the ex-pilot always trusted Reed and comforted the team when needed , he was the moral anchor of the team , but he was also an anchor dragging Reed down , always making him second guessing him self , always distracting him so he can find a cure

They must be dealt with


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Master_Kind - 4/1/2015 1:06 AM
Thanks!
colleem - 3/31/2015 9:22 AM
Very nice chapter Master_Kind
C.King - 3/26/2015 8:17 AM
With Random Romance...Blue Man says it's an everything mixed universe, but it seems more like Marvel/DC. Should I try a true everything universe, splinter off into new realms outside the big two... or both?
q - 3/18/2015 9:47 PM
Have ideas for others, will add more options later
misbegotten2 - 3/18/2015 4:53 PM
ESchorcho: sure
ESchorcho - 3/18/2015 2:58 PM
misbegotten2, loved the new chapter. I will try to add to it soon. Do you want to start a thread in the message board about the storyline?
misbegotten2 - 3/18/2015 12:42 AM
ESchorcho-I'll have a new chapter for the Buffy Fuckdoll Finishing School up either Wed or Thurs.
misbegotten2 - 3/12/2015 11:24 AM
ESchorcho, just got my Computer back this week and I'll be able add a chapter in a few days.
ESchorcho - 3/11/2015 9:48 PM
misbegotton2, I will be a while with a Fuckdoll Finishing School chapter so if your computer is fixed please feel free to post something.
q - 3/8/2015 10:12 PM
I don't anticipate doing much with King's Pendant besides one more episode for one more idea I have.



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