Title

Roberta finds flaws in Johnny and Ben as well

by Sultan Singory
Storyline Rise of Roberta
Characters Thing Human Torch
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before she started her plan for sue , her sensors showed the other members of the team approaching

She saw Johnny and Ben entering the baxter building

Johnny and Ben , while they were part of the team we very flawed

Johnny storm is reckless and has endangered the team many times , not only that , but he is a very bad role model for the kids , not to mention he would try to defend his sister and throw a wrench in her would be perfect planning

Ben Grimm , the strong man of the team , the ex-pilot always trusted Reed and comforted the team when needed , he was the moral anchor of the team , but he was also an anchor dragging Reed down , always making him second guessing him self , always distracting him so he can find a cure

They must be dealt with


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Gorel - 7/28/2016 8:44 PM
Sadly its a reoccurring problem Regret.
Regret - 7/28/2016 2:55 PM
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F_doomed - 7/28/2016 2:47 PM
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OmegaJay - 7/28/2016 1:43 PM
I'm glad some one likes my stories I'll keep doing my best
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Posted a question in the message boards, it would help if people answered.
Yang Xiao Long - 7/21/2016 3:41 PM
Got it done. Sorry 4 da wait
Yang Xiao Long - 7/20/2016 11:53 PM
Sorry for taking longer. I have been busy. Chapter should be up tomorrow
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I'll add to Devilish Woman tonight
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