Title

Roberta finds flaws in Johnny and Ben as well

by Sultan Singory
Storyline Rise of Roberta
Characters Thing Human Torch
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before she started her plan for sue , her sensors showed the other members of the team approaching

She saw Johnny and Ben entering the baxter building

Johnny and Ben , while they were part of the team we very flawed

Johnny storm is reckless and has endangered the team many times , not only that , but he is a very bad role model for the kids , not to mention he would try to defend his sister and throw a wrench in her would be perfect planning

Ben Grimm , the strong man of the team , the ex-pilot always trusted Reed and comforted the team when needed , he was the moral anchor of the team , but he was also an anchor dragging Reed down , always making him second guessing him self , always distracting him so he can find a cure

They must be dealt with


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colleem - 1/15/2018 2:37 PM
Yang. Not a great fan of sailer moon but I read your story and enjoyed it. I always like stories with a well written background
ESchorcho - 1/15/2018 8:10 AM
Sorry Gorel. I'll try to write a chapter today or tomorrow.
Yang Xiao Long - 1/15/2018 3:41 AM
What do you guys think of the Sailor Moon story I added? I would love some feedback and help with it.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/14/2018 9:06 PM
Thanks for that C.King I've posted another chapter to Dropping By.
C.King - 1/14/2018 1:51 PM
Not sure when I can update DB:SW again, unless inspired. But hope it gives you inspiration and determination, Drake.
Gorel - 1/14/2018 1:30 PM
Hey Eschorcho, if you need more time I could do a side story, or a post that won't effect yours.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:04 PM
On a side note Jimmy Hucow has been updated.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:02 PM
Okay maybe that wasn't well thought out. The test is more or less if Baroness can go through with her plan and how committed she is to her goal.
C.King - 1/13/2018 7:40 PM
Drake, the plan seems to have more then one part for the options. Does the test only begin and end with the rescue to begin with?
gothamalleyviper - 1/13/2018 5:52 PM
Sorry Drake I am not feeling the SW at the moment, if I get an inspiration I might toss out a chapter, C.K I hope you like the chapter and the openings it leaves for Gotham.



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