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Bruce decided his girls needed new uniforms, and some lingerie for when they are pleasuring him. As well as giving them the ability to switch between, naked, battlesuit, lingerie, and other outfits he might want for them, with just a thought. For each
of them he only gave Zatanna brief description on what he wanted for them, and let her decide on more details for them.
Diana's outfit didn't change much, as it was already a good battle suit. However, it no longer covered her breasts at all, leaving them fully exposed.
Zatanna's outfit became a white latex bodysuit. Over it she still wore her black tux, fully open. She still wore her gloves and hat.
Bruce decided Cheetah was best left naked.
Next, was his two sexy guards. They needed outfits that contrasted each other's, yet complemented each others at the same time. They also needed to be able to provide protection in battle. Both needed completly new outfits, that would suit their roles as guards.
Ice's clothes were replaced with a suit of knight-like armor. It was light as a feather, yet harder than diamond. It was fully clear, like her namesake element, which left her full body on display. It also had a few snowflake shaped patterns around it, as well
as her signature iceberg pattern. It's magical properties made it unable to melt, even in the hottest temperatures. Ice thought, and using her powers created herself a sword and shield, as well.
Fire, was given a contrasting, yet complementary outfit to Ice's. Her's could not be seen through as all, and didn't cover much of her body. It was a pair of stiletto boots, with flame patterns on them, a black bikini, with the same flame pattern on it. It
was made fire proof so she wouldn't burn her own clothes off of her.
As for Catwoman. He was a bit fond of her already sexy outfit, and decided to leave it as is, but did have Zatanna use her magic to fix the cuts on it.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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