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It was the wedding of the century. Everyone would be there. Heroes, villains, all promising to behave themselves, would be in attendance. After all, this was the most important wedding of all time! The bride and groom were the last two people anyone
would expect to get married, so naturally, everyone was interested.
But really, who would have suspected that Doctor Doom would confess his love to Squirrel Girl and she would accept his offer to marry her?
Several heroes and villains were interviewed. Their answers were basically the same.
Mr. Fantastic: ...I just... I'm at a complete loss. Certainly I'm glad that Victor has found someone special, but taking Squirrel Girl's personsality into account... It just doesn't add up!
Red Skull: ...The fact that a true Ubermench like Doom is wedding himself to THAT WOMAN... For God's sake, there is a crisis councilling group consisting of villains that were beaten by her, that DOOM FOUNDED!
Deadpool: Whatever kind of crack the author was on when he thought up this kookie plot, I WANT SOME!
Electro: ...This is really quite astonishing. Of everyone in the group, Doom seemed the most affected by his defeat by her, especially since he lost to her in Squirrel Girl's debut mission. I honestly never saw this coming.
But no matter the confusion, it was really happening. Squirrel Girl and Doctor Doom were getting married.
And the world was about to go topsy turvy.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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