Title

Zazzala "Queen Bee"'s Macro.

by Shendude
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC M/F Mind Control Harem
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...the macro for Zazzala AKA Queen Bee I, ruler of the planet Korrl. As her image came up, Peter whistled.

"For an alien bug, she's pretty hot," he commented. "No need to change the body, I think. The personality, though..."

Obviously, a meglomaniacal conqueror wouldn't do. And her mind control powers made him equally uncomfortable. So, he altered her history; when she first came to Earth, she was infected by a local pathogen that altered her hypno-pollen. Not realizing this, the first time she used it and was herself enthralled to her intended victim, namely Peter. Eventually, the pollen wore off, but had by then fallen genuinely in love with him.

Thanks to the Macro, her personality was automatically adjusted to suit this new history.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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