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There are many Lantern Corps. each fueled by a different emotion. But no one knew their has been another Corps as well. The Pink Lanterns.
While the Pink Lanterns could use their rings to create constructs, like other lantern corps could, they had another, uniqe power to them. They could turn people into their sex-crazed slaves. With each person enslaved to a Pink Lantern, the more powerful they
became. Eventually they had claimed a whole planet's populace. Hoping to help other world find the wonders and enjoyment of sex, they created two more rings, and sent them into space to eventually land on a planet and be found by someone to wear them. For
centuries, the two pink rings, drifted through space, until they arrived on Earth.
The two rings, landed on Earth. Both full of immense power. And as soon as someone put them on, the Pink Lanterns would have 2 new members, and these new lanterns would turn the people of the world into sex-hungry slaves.
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Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:00 AM
For general plot, I'd like to focus on Diana building her harem, with some kinky scenes, particularly one where she makes herself and her harem obese for a day.
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