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"Oooo, how delicious."
Wolverine and Colossus' chains clanked as they looked up to see the two gigantic abominations lumber towards them: Emma Frost as a huge monstrous statue carved out of spikey diamond and Storm as an ebony black, horned, tusked, ogrish fertility idol.
Emma tickled Colossus under his chin, her talons causing sparks to fly from his metal skin.
"You used to seem so big and impressive before, Piotr," Emma giggled. "Now you're as cute as a button!"
"And must worship his goddess!" Storm growled as she grabbed the back of Colossus' head and ground it against her left tit. Storm had the hugest breasts of any abomination, even bigger than Rogue's, made her like almost like some prehistoric Venus of Wallendorf
figure. "Drink your goddess' nourishing milk!"
Colossus started to suck, taking in Storm's thick, rich milk.
"And don't think we're neglecting you, Logan," Emma said as she turned to the other one. "In fact... I've got a use for your tongue."
* * *
"Uuuhh! OOO! OOOO!"
Mayday Parker writhed on the floor, getting larger and larger.
"Ohhh, MJ! MJ!"
She was pregnant! So pregnant! It felt amazing! And then Mayday realized something that made it even more amazing... so deliciously, heavenly wicked! The father was Peter!
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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