Polaris returns to X-Factor with a different attitude

by q
Storyline Shame and Defeat
Previous Chapter A good choice for a bitch or sissy gets spotted

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In the living room of X-Factor Investigations Headquarters...

"What's going on out here?" Jamie Madrox, Multiple Man, said, before pausing and staring gape-jawed at the strange sight before him. "Lorna? What are you doing?"

"She's learned her place and she's taking it," Monet smugly replied. At the moment, she was reclining in a chair with her arms behind her head, feet resting on the back of her designated footstool known as Polaris. The green-haired mutant, in addition to working as a living ottoman, had her face buried into Layla's spread legs, lapping at the blonde's wet sex.

Jamie found it confounding. "And Lorna is okay with this?"

"More than okay, she asked for this," Layla answered. "Listen."

With a click of a remote in Layla's hand, an audio recording from the security feed played back over the room's speakers. The speaker, distinctly Polaris, came through loud and clear.


"Oh god, Layla and Monet. I can't spend one more second living a lie."

"Lorna? What's wrong?" Layla's playback said.

"I'm pathetic, Layla. I'm so pathetic I had to force myself back into an old team of mine made of members ten years younger than me, and I still can't hold a candle to you and Monet. You're so skilled, so sexy, so... so..."

"Bout time," spouted Monet.

"Lorna," Layla asked, "what are you trying to say?"

"I'm trying to say I'm nothing next to the two of you. You're the queens of the team, I'm just a flunky. I... I..." There was a sudden pause, giving a false sense that they had reached the end, before a sudden outburst came through the speakers. "That's it!"

"What's it?"

"I'll be your sidekick!" Polaris excitedly proclaimed. "Women as great as the two of you deserve to have someone beneath you that you can boss around, and it's obvious with how low I've sunk that I need a mentor or two to train me and rescue me when I get myself into trouble. Imagine how much respect the two of you will get when you get to tell people you're mentoring a woman nearly ten years your senior!"

"If that's what you want," Layla said, "then you can start by giving me a thrill between my legs."

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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