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Dr Strange and the Scarlet Witch looked down with surprise at the naked form of Susan Storm, huddled on the floor between them. Before their eyes, she seemed to shimmer and fade, and with a despairing wail she was gone.
At that moment, the door to his sanctum was flung open and there stood…Sue Storm! Both stared at her in bewilderment as she strode into the room. This was the new Sue Storm and she was dressed to reflect her new “career”, in a shimmering black PVC biker’s jacket, black latex miniskirt, thigh-boots and a black leather bustier. She looked back and for the between the perplexed sorcerers, and spoke. “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”
In the alleyway, Johnny Storm had just had an incredible orgasm and sent his hot seed pumping down what he thought was his sister’s throat, but seconds later, there was Hellcat rising before him, licking her lips with a wicked smile. Then a look of concern crossed her face. She spoke to Lustae, who still hovered at Johnny’s shoulder. “I sense that the Master is in need of us. Come!”
With that, the air around them seemed to fill with acrid red smoke and the next thing Johnny knew, he was standing in a fiery cavern that he recognised all too well – Mephisto’s realm! The Hell Lord himself was slumped weakly in his throne. Hellcat went to him and knelt at his feet. “My Master! What ails you?”
Susan’s eyes flickered open. Her mind was a muddle or recent memories. She remembered going to her perception filter and putting on her latex stripper disguise, going to the strip club, and then everything became a blur after that. There was a vague sense that she’d been held captive and used for the pleasure of some powerful evil force, but her mind couldn’t focus on it.
And now, strange new memories were flooding over her, that seemed to come from someone else altogether! It was almost as if she’d been flung into a new body whose original spirit had fled. With a gasp, Sue realised what had happened!
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Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 12:56 PM
colleem - 1/23/2017 11:50 AM
Helen-troy :) have a Question on the Massage Board
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 9:32 AM
As soon as I brought the Corruptor over, my laptop key board went ka-put, so Don't expect much until next week when I get a new one.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over.
Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site?
I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol.
Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Understandable, it read to me as satire.
But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms
so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare).
Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char
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