Title

[Mephisto] Stay with 'good' Sue

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman Mephisto Dr. Strange Scarlet Witch Human Torch Hellcat
Category Corruption
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Dr Strange and the Scarlet Witch looked down with surprise at the naked form of Susan Storm, huddled on the floor between them. Before their eyes, she seemed to shimmer and fade, and with a despairing wail she was gone.

At that moment, the door to his sanctum was flung open and there stood…Sue Storm! Both stared at her in bewilderment as she strode into the room. This was the new Sue Storm and she was dressed to reflect her new “career”, in a shimmering black PVC biker’s jacket, black latex miniskirt, thigh-boots and a black leather bustier. She looked back and for the between the perplexed sorcerers, and spoke. “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”

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In the alleyway, Johnny Storm had just had an incredible orgasm and sent his hot seed pumping down what he thought was his sister’s throat, but seconds later, there was Hellcat rising before him, licking her lips with a wicked smile. Then a look of concern crossed her face. She spoke to Lustae, who still hovered at Johnny’s shoulder. “I sense that the Master is in need of us. Come!”

With that, the air around them seemed to fill with acrid red smoke and the next thing Johnny knew, he was standing in a fiery cavern that he recognised all too well – Mephisto’s realm! The Hell Lord himself was slumped weakly in his throne. Hellcat went to him and knelt at his feet. “My Master! What ails you?”

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Susan’s eyes flickered open. Her mind was a muddle or recent memories. She remembered going to her perception filter and putting on her latex stripper disguise, going to the strip club, and then everything became a blur after that. There was a vague sense that she’d been held captive and used for the pleasure of some powerful evil force, but her mind couldn’t focus on it.

And now, strange new memories were flooding over her, that seemed to come from someone else altogether! It was almost as if she’d been flung into a new body whose original spirit had fled. With a gasp, Sue realised what had happened!


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gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.
gothamalleyviper - 12/14/2014 4:39 PM
Posted 63rd Joker, working on Rubber Queen



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