Title

[Mephisto] Stay with 'good' Sue

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman Mephisto Dr. Strange Scarlet Witch Human Torch Hellcat
Category Corruption
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Dr Strange and the Scarlet Witch looked down with surprise at the naked form of Susan Storm, huddled on the floor between them. Before their eyes, she seemed to shimmer and fade, and with a despairing wail she was gone.

At that moment, the door to his sanctum was flung open and there stood…Sue Storm! Both stared at her in bewilderment as she strode into the room. This was the new Sue Storm and she was dressed to reflect her new “career”, in a shimmering black PVC biker’s jacket, black latex miniskirt, thigh-boots and a black leather bustier. She looked back and for the between the perplexed sorcerers, and spoke. “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”

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In the alleyway, Johnny Storm had just had an incredible orgasm and sent his hot seed pumping down what he thought was his sister’s throat, but seconds later, there was Hellcat rising before him, licking her lips with a wicked smile. Then a look of concern crossed her face. She spoke to Lustae, who still hovered at Johnny’s shoulder. “I sense that the Master is in need of us. Come!”

With that, the air around them seemed to fill with acrid red smoke and the next thing Johnny knew, he was standing in a fiery cavern that he recognised all too well – Mephisto’s realm! The Hell Lord himself was slumped weakly in his throne. Hellcat went to him and knelt at his feet. “My Master! What ails you?”

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Susan’s eyes flickered open. Her mind was a muddle or recent memories. She remembered going to her perception filter and putting on her latex stripper disguise, going to the strip club, and then everything became a blur after that. There was a vague sense that she’d been held captive and used for the pleasure of some powerful evil force, but her mind couldn’t focus on it.

And now, strange new memories were flooding over her, that seemed to come from someone else altogether! It was almost as if she’d been flung into a new body whose original spirit had fled. With a gasp, Sue realised what had happened!


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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