[Mephisto] Stay with 'good' Sue

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman Mephisto Dr. Strange Scarlet Witch Human Torch Hellcat
Category Corruption
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Dr Strange and the Scarlet Witch looked down with surprise at the naked form of Susan Storm, huddled on the floor between them. Before their eyes, she seemed to shimmer and fade, and with a despairing wail she was gone.

At that moment, the door to his sanctum was flung open and there stood…Sue Storm! Both stared at her in bewilderment as she strode into the room. This was the new Sue Storm and she was dressed to reflect her new “career”, in a shimmering black PVC biker’s jacket, black latex miniskirt, thigh-boots and a black leather bustier. She looked back and for the between the perplexed sorcerers, and spoke. “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”


In the alleyway, Johnny Storm had just had an incredible orgasm and sent his hot seed pumping down what he thought was his sister’s throat, but seconds later, there was Hellcat rising before him, licking her lips with a wicked smile. Then a look of concern crossed her face. She spoke to Lustae, who still hovered at Johnny’s shoulder. “I sense that the Master is in need of us. Come!”

With that, the air around them seemed to fill with acrid red smoke and the next thing Johnny knew, he was standing in a fiery cavern that he recognised all too well – Mephisto’s realm! The Hell Lord himself was slumped weakly in his throne. Hellcat went to him and knelt at his feet. “My Master! What ails you?”


Susan’s eyes flickered open. Her mind was a muddle or recent memories. She remembered going to her perception filter and putting on her latex stripper disguise, going to the strip club, and then everything became a blur after that. There was a vague sense that she’d been held captive and used for the pleasure of some powerful evil force, but her mind couldn’t focus on it.

And now, strange new memories were flooding over her, that seemed to come from someone else altogether! It was almost as if she’d been flung into a new body whose original spirit had fled. With a gasp, Sue realised what had happened!

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gothamalleyviper - 10/4/2015 11:43 AM
Can Someone please pick up the next chapter on Fempoclyse Happened? I would like to take a look at other parts of the DC world but am not that familiar with areas outside of Gotham or Metropolis.
colleem - 10/3/2015 2:00 AM
just as an hint. in my chapter the Baxter Building will have a total Blackout. just if you guys want to work on your next chapters in the meantime
colleem - 10/3/2015 1:57 AM
Think i will start a Susan Chapter today with focus on Reed and the Nun. will not go to much in detail what is with her but some very strange things will happen
ESchorcho - 10/1/2015 11:43 PM
Also, feel free to add to the story now.
ESchorcho - 10/1/2015 11:43 PM
Let me know what you think of the Mephisto chapters.
ESchorcho - 10/1/2015 12:37 PM
Should have more Mephisto in a bit to go along with the other new chapters.
gothamalleyviper - 9/29/2015 6:25 PM
I had the idea when I read the Disney Chapter of the Cursed costume and that was before anything from Monster Candy.
gothamalleyviper - 9/29/2015 7:40 AM
What would the Movie "Knocked up" look like if it stared superheroes? How would it get started? Who would be the unlikely couple?
Gorel - 9/28/2015 11:00 PM
Hey Anarchy let me know if you can't post, I can sub in.
gothamalleyviper - 9/28/2015 8:55 PM
New Posts, Feed back is requested.

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