[Mephisto] Stay with 'good' Sue

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman Mephisto Dr. Strange Scarlet Witch Human Torch Hellcat
Category Corruption
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Dr Strange and the Scarlet Witch looked down with surprise at the naked form of Susan Storm, huddled on the floor between them. Before their eyes, she seemed to shimmer and fade, and with a despairing wail she was gone.

At that moment, the door to his sanctum was flung open and there stood…Sue Storm! Both stared at her in bewilderment as she strode into the room. This was the new Sue Storm and she was dressed to reflect her new “career”, in a shimmering black PVC biker’s jacket, black latex miniskirt, thigh-boots and a black leather bustier. She looked back and for the between the perplexed sorcerers, and spoke. “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”


In the alleyway, Johnny Storm had just had an incredible orgasm and sent his hot seed pumping down what he thought was his sister’s throat, but seconds later, there was Hellcat rising before him, licking her lips with a wicked smile. Then a look of concern crossed her face. She spoke to Lustae, who still hovered at Johnny’s shoulder. “I sense that the Master is in need of us. Come!”

With that, the air around them seemed to fill with acrid red smoke and the next thing Johnny knew, he was standing in a fiery cavern that he recognised all too well – Mephisto’s realm! The Hell Lord himself was slumped weakly in his throne. Hellcat went to him and knelt at his feet. “My Master! What ails you?”


Susan’s eyes flickered open. Her mind was a muddle or recent memories. She remembered going to her perception filter and putting on her latex stripper disguise, going to the strip club, and then everything became a blur after that. There was a vague sense that she’d been held captive and used for the pleasure of some powerful evil force, but her mind couldn’t focus on it.

And now, strange new memories were flooding over her, that seemed to come from someone else altogether! It was almost as if she’d been flung into a new body whose original spirit had fled. With a gasp, Sue realised what had happened!

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gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496

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