You must login to rate the chapter
"What's this now?" Green Lantern said as the alarm went off. He was on monitor duty at the Watchtower, the JLA's moon base. "Some kind of disturbance in Boston. That's usually Diana's turf, I wonder what she's up to?"
As Lantern used the systems of the Watchtower to look for the disturbance, the teleporter pad in the arrival hall quietly activated. Wonder Dyke still remembered her former, good self's Watchtower codes and was able to activate them from one of their many stations,
transporting her, Dovergirl, Psycho and Eye Candy and Steph up there.
The bimbos were amazed at the size and complexity of the JLA base, with Wonder Dyke and Psycho herding them on. Wonder Dyke knew how to avoid the security measures too, a useful skill. As they made their way through the visitor's hall and the trophy room, the
five villainesses crept up towards the monitor station.
Green Lantern was still there, trying to make sense of the controls.
In the blink of an eye Wonder Dyke had launched herself at her former colleague and grabbed him from behind.
"Quickly, the zip!" she shouted.
Or add your own
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
You must be a member to post to the wall