Title

French Maid

by CJ
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Body Modification Marvel Humiliation
Previous Chapter Susan is alone in the Baxter Building

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The woman who stepped from the machine was very different.  Hair a rich chesnut brown done up in a elegant up do.  Makeup light and professional.  She was wearing a french maid outfit with a low cut top with frilly apron and short skirt showing off her long toned legs complete with fishnet hose and stiletto heels.  As Susan looked into a mirror to check her appearance she once more felt the disbelief that she had gotten herself into this situation. 

It had all started on a normal ladies night out with Janet, Jen, and some of the other female heros when they had started a game of poker.  The game had progressed with the usual drinking and gossiping until she had gotten low on chips.  Jen had thrown out the suggestion of trading in articles of clothing for more. 

Eventually it had gotten down to Susan in her panties and what she thought was an unbeatable hand.  Since her panties weren't rated as valuable enough, despite a few snickers and jibes of how much some perverts would pay for them, it was suggested that Sue put up a forfeit of some sort.  Even now she wasn't sure who made the suggestion but maid service had been put forth and after some argument had been agreed to with Jen drawing up a document, which included a minimum number of hours a day that had to be worked, employer control of the uniform, and number of days of service, and Susan signing it plus witnesses. 

The hand was played and Sue lost the pot and her forfeit.

So here she was getting ready for her first day of service, she was lucky they had allowed her to use the perception filter to disguise herself just in case anyone saw her.  Her new employer had picked her look and also chosen the name of Suzette for her.


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Fanfic Fetishist - 6/21/2017 10:27 PM
Dank. Whatcha need?
Danknoodle420 - 6/21/2017 10:21 AM
I plan on continuing writing, but I was finding myself in a bit of a sticky situation... I need help describing the settings and such. I have been sticking to what I can do for a long time and I really wanted to try something new. By the way thanks Cal
Cal512 - 6/20/2017 11:44 AM
Darknoodle, there is that Ann Weying fanfic on DA and fanfiction.net Granted it's not very long atm.
ESchorcho - 6/20/2017 9:57 AM
Danknoodle420, it's an erotic fanfic-themed addventure.
Danknoodle420 - 6/20/2017 1:58 AM
I literally spent hours searching for a Symbiote fanfic that isn't just based COMPLETELY on sexual activities. But I had came to a conclusion that it's impossible. Feel free to message me if you found a really good one or made one yourself. I'd love to
Master_Kind - 6/20/2017 1:25 AM
Apologies for the long delay in posting. Life's been a bit crazy lately. Jimmy, remind me to update Hard Reboot on the wall if I don't get to it soon.
Master_Kind - 6/19/2017 5:48 PM
Apologies for the long delay in posting. Life's been a bit crazy lately. Jimmy, remind me to update Hard Reboot on the wall if I don't get to it soon.
symdude90 - 6/19/2017 8:10 AM
@Danknoodle420 nice job on those last two chapters! The quality of your work continues to improve with every chapter! Keep up the great work!
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2017 4:31 AM
hoya: Maybe I didn't say it well. Sorry for confusion or inaccuracy. I hope it didn't ruin the story for you.
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2017 4:29 AM
Hoya: Thanks. I'm aware that exec orders are not law. The idea was to get a congressman to add the order as a rider to a bill, sight unseen. maybe that's not possible.



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