Title

French Maid

by CJ
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Body Modification Marvel Humiliation
Previous Chapter Susan is alone in the Baxter Building

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The woman who stepped from the machine was very different.  Hair a rich chesnut brown done up in a elegant up do.  Makeup light and professional.  She was wearing a french maid outfit with a low cut top with frilly apron and short skirt showing off her long toned legs complete with fishnet hose and stiletto heels.  As Susan looked into a mirror to check her appearance she once more felt the disbelief that she had gotten herself into this situation. 

It had all started on a normal ladies night out with Janet, Jen, and some of the other female heros when they had started a game of poker.  The game had progressed with the usual drinking and gossiping until she had gotten low on chips.  Jen had thrown out the suggestion of trading in articles of clothing for more. 

Eventually it had gotten down to Susan in her panties and what she thought was an unbeatable hand.  Since her panties weren't rated as valuable enough, despite a few snickers and jibes of how much some perverts would pay for them, it was suggested that Sue put up a forfeit of some sort.  Even now she wasn't sure who made the suggestion but maid service had been put forth and after some argument had been agreed to with Jen drawing up a document, which included a minimum number of hours a day that had to be worked, employer control of the uniform, and number of days of service, and Susan signing it plus witnesses. 

The hand was played and Sue lost the pot and her forfeit.

So here she was getting ready for her first day of service, she was lucky they had allowed her to use the perception filter to disguise herself just in case anyone saw her.  Her new employer had picked her look and also chosen the name of Suzette for her.


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ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 6:32 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check out the message board.
colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.



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