Title

French Maid

by CJ
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Body Modification Marvel Humiliation
Previous Chapter Susan is alone in the Baxter Building

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The woman who stepped from the machine was very different.  Hair a rich chesnut brown done up in a elegant up do.  Makeup light and professional.  She was wearing a french maid outfit with a low cut top with frilly apron and short skirt showing off her long toned legs complete with fishnet hose and stiletto heels.  As Susan looked into a mirror to check her appearance she once more felt the disbelief that she had gotten herself into this situation. 

It had all started on a normal ladies night out with Janet, Jen, and some of the other female heros when they had started a game of poker.  The game had progressed with the usual drinking and gossiping until she had gotten low on chips.  Jen had thrown out the suggestion of trading in articles of clothing for more. 

Eventually it had gotten down to Susan in her panties and what she thought was an unbeatable hand.  Since her panties weren't rated as valuable enough, despite a few snickers and jibes of how much some perverts would pay for them, it was suggested that Sue put up a forfeit of some sort.  Even now she wasn't sure who made the suggestion but maid service had been put forth and after some argument had been agreed to with Jen drawing up a document, which included a minimum number of hours a day that had to be worked, employer control of the uniform, and number of days of service, and Susan signing it plus witnesses. 

The hand was played and Sue lost the pot and her forfeit.

So here she was getting ready for her first day of service, she was lucky they had allowed her to use the perception filter to disguise herself just in case anyone saw her.  Her new employer had picked her look and also chosen the name of Suzette for her.


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gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)



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