Title

The Thing is altered

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic Thing
Category Corruption Transformation
Previous Chapter Peter and Aunty Crystal

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Ben Grimm's form shifted, he felt as if his body was being stretched in every direction, through time as well as space.

His gigantic rocky form became more sensitive, shifting in density and texture. He felt more control over it, he wasn't becoming human again, he was turning into something else entirely.

He was less and less bothered by his inhuman appearance, he was better than human. In this new world, love wouldn't be an issue for him. Depraved sex acts were the norm, and he could be as monstrous as Sue wished.

His limbs cracked and popped, becoming larger, more imposing, his head stretched and contorted, horns protruded from his skull. What was left before the Richards couple was a 8 foot minotaur with rocky skin, completely manipulatable in texture, rigidity and sensitivity. More monster than ever, Ben felt content with his shape. Sue gazed upon her work, specifically the massive 16 inch bull cock dangling from Ben's crotch.

"See Ben, I bet you feel so much better now."

"Remarkable" Said Reed, taking in Sue's chimera creation.

"Feelin' pretty great, Suze" snorted the Thing. 

"Bet you'd like to try out your new form on somebody, wouldn't you? You should be feeling very very horny. Me and Reed would just love to see you in action."

"Definitely, Sue." Said the newly corrupted Reed "And I know just the Girl for the job..."Ben Grimm's form shifted, he felt as if his body was being stretched in every direction, through time as well as space.

His gigantic rocky form became more sensitive, shifting in density and texture. He felt more control over it, he wasn't becoming human again, he was turning into something else entirely.

He was less and less bothered by his inhuman appearance, he was better than human. In this new world, love wouldn't be an issue for him. Depraved sex acts were the norm, and he could be as monstrous as Sue wished.

His limbs cracked and popped, becoming larger, more imposing, his head stretched and contorted, horns protruded from his skull. What was left before the Richards couple was a 8 foot minotaur with rocky skin, completely manipulatable in texture, rigidity and sensitivity. More monster than ever, Ben felt content with his shape. Sue gazed upon her work, specifically the massive 16 inch horse cock dangling from Ben's crotch.

"See Ben, I bet you feel so much better now."

"Remarkable" Said Reed, taking in Sue's chimera creation.

"Feelin' pretty great, Suze" snorted the Thing. 

"Bet you'd like to try out your new form on somebody, wouldn't you? You should be feeling very very horny. Me and Reed would just love to see you in action."

"Definitely, Sue." Said the newly corrupted Reed "And I know just the Girl for the job..."


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ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 7:21 AM
Nice work, exidor455 on the new Susan Storm's Secret Life chapter. I really enjoy this storyline. Thanks for keeping it going.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 4:25 AM
Added a new chapter to Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto thread. :)
XFAN - 7/20/2014 8:09 PM
If you head over to Hypnopics C.King there is a decent Queen Bee story.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:58 PM
For those who don't know, Peter's Ex Amanda was played by Jeri Ryan, Kate Logan by Tia Carrere, and Doc Kelly by Paula Garc├ęs. H.G. was played by Jaime Murray.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:35 PM
Given Young Justice Cartoon villain Queen Bee's powers, especially how it was displayed in the spin off comic's last issue... Why no one has used a Queen Bee fanfiction, especially erotic fanfiction.
rakasur - 7/20/2014 4:44 AM
I really like Superia-ority Complex, it's a very good story. I hope to see also heroine of DC like Wonder Woman and Mary Marvel. I hope also to see confrontation between Superia and Amora, Circe, Lorelei, a gender-bender Thor and other Godess. I re



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