Title

The Thing is altered

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic Thing
Category Corruption Transformation
Previous Chapter Peter and Aunty Crystal

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Ben Grimm's form shifted, he felt as if his body was being stretched in every direction, through time as well as space.

His gigantic rocky form became more sensitive, shifting in density and texture. He felt more control over it, he wasn't becoming human again, he was turning into something else entirely.

He was less and less bothered by his inhuman appearance, he was better than human. In this new world, love wouldn't be an issue for him. Depraved sex acts were the norm, and he could be as monstrous as Sue wished.

His limbs cracked and popped, becoming larger, more imposing, his head stretched and contorted, horns protruded from his skull. What was left before the Richards couple was a 8 foot minotaur with rocky skin, completely manipulatable in texture, rigidity and sensitivity. More monster than ever, Ben felt content with his shape. Sue gazed upon her work, specifically the massive 16 inch bull cock dangling from Ben's crotch.

"See Ben, I bet you feel so much better now."

"Remarkable" Said Reed, taking in Sue's chimera creation.

"Feelin' pretty great, Suze" snorted the Thing. 

"Bet you'd like to try out your new form on somebody, wouldn't you? You should be feeling very very horny. Me and Reed would just love to see you in action."

"Definitely, Sue." Said the newly corrupted Reed "And I know just the Girl for the job..."Ben Grimm's form shifted, he felt as if his body was being stretched in every direction, through time as well as space.

His gigantic rocky form became more sensitive, shifting in density and texture. He felt more control over it, he wasn't becoming human again, he was turning into something else entirely.

He was less and less bothered by his inhuman appearance, he was better than human. In this new world, love wouldn't be an issue for him. Depraved sex acts were the norm, and he could be as monstrous as Sue wished.

His limbs cracked and popped, becoming larger, more imposing, his head stretched and contorted, horns protruded from his skull. What was left before the Richards couple was a 8 foot minotaur with rocky skin, completely manipulatable in texture, rigidity and sensitivity. More monster than ever, Ben felt content with his shape. Sue gazed upon her work, specifically the massive 16 inch horse cock dangling from Ben's crotch.

"See Ben, I bet you feel so much better now."

"Remarkable" Said Reed, taking in Sue's chimera creation.

"Feelin' pretty great, Suze" snorted the Thing. 

"Bet you'd like to try out your new form on somebody, wouldn't you? You should be feeling very very horny. Me and Reed would just love to see you in action."

"Definitely, Sue." Said the newly corrupted Reed "And I know just the Girl for the job..."


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Grimmer - 7/30/2015 5:19 PM
Glad to hear it Les and I won't write another chapter until you've had time to add your next one.
LesLes - 7/30/2015 5:13 PM
Loved it! I'm writing something for Shendude first, but I've got ideas for Gotham's Sirens
Grimmer - 7/29/2015 1:13 PM
Hope you enjoyed what I wrote Les Les. Thanks again for continuing this storyline with me!
clifford.cao - 7/29/2015 11:59 AM
Wedgeyman - if you're reading this, I've sent an email to your old email address. Please respond if you've received it.
LesLes - 7/28/2015 4:53 PM
Glad you liked Atlee's recruitment! Eager to read what you write. Also, there's a thread on the Messageboard now
Grimmer - 7/27/2015 7:32 PM
Les, these are both great chapters. Think I'll continue from the Atlee direction though. Expect my next chapter in a couple days and might write two, one following the heroines, the other the villainesses.
LesLes - 7/27/2015 4:59 PM
@Grimmer, hope one of those suits!
colleem - 7/25/2015 3:46 PM
You getting better ^^ only 2 this time :)
Amiee - 7/25/2015 1:59 PM
Dammit, multiple posts again!
Amiee - 7/25/2015 1:43 PM
Hey guys, some feedback on my story would be much appreciated! See the thread in the message board :)



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