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"Let's have a little fun," Susan giggled.
Reed's eyes went wide as his cock started to stretch, pulled by Susan's invisible tendrils, while his buttcheeks were pushed further and further apart as well.
He tried to speak, but he was still muffled by the gag, which started to expand as well.
"Mmmm, let's see what I can do, you silly-putty slave," Susan said. "Oh yesss. Take it, you sissy whore!"
Suddenly a resounding slap broke the air as Reed's stretched buttocks shook like jell-o. This was followed by two more slaps.
"Oh yess! Again and again!" Sue cried in sadistic glee. "How do you like that, Reed! Who's number one now? Have a smart-ass remark? Going to say something to put me in my place?"
Reed tried to say something, but his mouth was too stuffed.
"What's wrong, invisible dildo got your tongue?" Sue sneered. "Oh fuck, take it all, you snooty, stuffy, smart-ass slut!"
She raised her hands and Reed started to stretch even more as slapping sounds came from all over his body.
"Take it fucking all!"
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colleem - 3/8/2014 8:24 AM
C.King. Any Idea for the Masterplan Marvel?
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
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