Title

She open a portal back to Latveria , she need to study the information she got

by supersizeme198
Storyline Supervillain Girlfriends
Characters Invisible Woman
Category
Previous Chapter Susan Richards combined with Dr. Doom

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Baroness Doom walked down the corriodr to her thrown room and was greated by her servant Boris. "Any new Buisness" Susan asked the man who had served her since she was a child.

"Prince Namor has sent yet another box of trinkets from a spanish galion, the Council has finished the terraformer project and the ambassador of symkaria want to discuse a trade agreement."

"Thank you Boris. I would like to be left allow for a while"

"Of coursemy lady"Boris replied as he left the room.

 Susan sat on her thrown and tried to gather her thoughts, her mind was a mess of familiar and unfamiliar thoughts closing her eyes she tried to centre herself.


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Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
Evva - 7/17/2017 6:33 AM
cool
extreme1 - 7/16/2017 10:26 PM
Evva, I can read it fine.
Evva - 7/16/2017 9:20 PM
Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884
Danknoodle420 - 7/12/2017 10:10 PM
Can someone write a story that includes the venom symbiote, struggle, and any girl you want from marvel? It's been a while and Im in need of inspiration. (Master_Kind again, here's another reminder.)
pierre - 7/12/2017 12:08 AM
I think it sorted itself out. Thank you for helping me



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