Title

Franklin and Crystal visit MJ, Peter is home

by Megumi
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Spider-Man Fantastic Four Crystal
Category
Previous Chapter Crystal mentions Mary Jane to Franklin

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Knock-Knock


Who could that be.  Peter walked up to the door and looked through the glass portal.  It was Franklin and Crystal.  Why are they here?  His parents know he's Spider-man; if they're in trouble would they have sent Frankie here?

He opened the door.

"Hello.  We're here to see Mary Jane."

Peter didn't expect that.  "You are?... What is this regarding?"

"That's personal."

"Yeah right.  Tell me, what sort of personal business would a kid have with a supermodel?"

"Kid!  I'm almost twenty."

"Uh-huh.  Anyway MJ is sleeping.  You should've called first."

"It's two in the afternoon."

"She had a late night gig.  Some photographer wanted stars in the background."

Peter sighed.  Was Franklin usually this much of a brat?  He never acted this way when Peter was in his read and blues.  There was also the buzz of his spider-sense.  He thought maybe Franklin was bringing trouble with him but no that wasn't quite right.

"Look, I came to see MJ and I am going to see MJ."


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CorruptionCentral - 3/2/2015 6:22 PM
Exidor: Yup, I've done it too. BTW, very enjoyable chapter
ESchorcho - 3/2/2015 8:23 AM
I've made that same mistake, exidor. You're not alone.
exidor455 - 3/2/2015 7:29 AM
Posted a new Mephisto chapter of SSSL, then realised I followed up the wrong chapter! Oh well, I don't suppose it matters. :)
gothamalleyviper - 2/27/2015 6:45 AM
Random Idea: Lesbian Perfume. Center female character gets dunked and then while she stays straight every woman in close proximity has an instant need to have lesbian sex with her. Thoughts?
misbegotten2 - 2/24/2015 2:37 PM
Eschorcho, it's cool, I'll probably have a new chapter up tomorrow or Thursday.
ESchorcho - 2/24/2015 9:29 AM
misbegotten2, I don't know how much time I will have to write for the Fuckdoll Finishing School so if you want to take the next chapter please do. That goes for anyone else as well.
misbegotten2 - 2/19/2015 10:29 AM
Eschorcho, that was a great addition. Give me a few days and I'll have something up.
ESchorcho - 2/16/2015 6:13 PM
misbegotten2, I'm working on a new chapter and should be able to post tomorrow.
misbegotten2 - 2/15/2015 2:50 PM
ESchoro-thank you for the compliment. I'll have a new chapter later tonight.
ESchorcho - 2/15/2015 8:08 AM
misbegotten2, that was one genius chapter in The Fuckdoll Finishing School. Please keep posting!



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