Title

Someone objects to the wedding

by mercury01
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic
Category Romance Marvel
Previous Chapter How's Moondragon getting ready?

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Susan heard a knock at her door as she was slipping on her bridal stockings. She threw on a robe and approached the door.

"Who is it?"

"It's Reed, Susan!" the voice of her ex-husband caried through. "I must talk to you!"

Susan rolled her eyes and opened the door enough to peer through. She glared at him.

"This is very important," Reed said, producing a handheld device. "I've detected some residual telepathic energy, originating from--"

"Enough, Reed, okay?" Susan said angrily. "Of course you're detecting telepathy from Heather. She's a telepath! And another thing: you're not going to win me back with your scientific double-talk, not anymore. You were always neglecting the children and I for your endless experiments, and that's over now. You had your chance. I love Heather and we're getting married. Object all you want, it's not going to change how I feel!"

She shut the door in Reed's face and sighed, rubbing her temples. She didn't like to be so harsh, but Reed was becoming infuriating with his sudden interest in her. She walked over to her dressing table and picked up an opera-length cigarette holder. She sat down and fitted a slender cigarette in the end and lit it up, breathing the wonderfully calming smoke in like a pro.

Susan had taken up smoking after she met Heather but before she'd divorced Reed. At first it was a way to simply annoy him, but she found she enjoyed the flavour and sensation of smoke. Not to mention her bald fiancee thought it was wickedly delightful. She'd even given Susan this cigarette holder as an engagement gift!

A few more puffs and all was right with the world. She was feeling mellow and she couldn't wait to visit Titan on their honeymoon! She set down the holder as she continued to get dressed. Suddenly there was another knock at the door...


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Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:00 PM
Ruleradvent - figure out how this works. It's not rocket science.
kingofthefarmyard1 - 8/12/2017 11:08 AM
I might try my hand at a new story. Any suggestions?
bambucea09 - 8/10/2017 5:23 AM
Were Spiderman goes into a alternative universe were are just females in. So is no transgender here.
bambucea09 - 8/10/2017 5:23 AM
This is a alternative universe were are just F like the one from Ultimate Spiderman, Spiderverse episode



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