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Emma convinces Jan to stay put

by darkraven32179
Storyline The Body-Melding Ray
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"I'm sorry dear but this is one order you will listen to." Emma spoke as she used her powers to slip into Jn's mind and cause her to pass out. Emma caught her with her telekinesis lifting her limp body off the ground. "I must say you really should learn to control that anger of yours."

Quickly she moved through the mansion, making sure to avoid anyone as she made her way back to her room, dropping the girl onto her bed she locked the door and took a seat next to her. "Just going to fix some things going on in your mind make you a little bit more fitting for your new life Jan." with that Emma plunged into Jan's mind.


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Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:56 AM
*risk of litigation with DA
Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:55 AM
My problem was litigation by DeviantArt and now I'm lacking motivation.
JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.



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