Title

Another Couple to Match Up.

by Jazze
Storyline Random Romance
Characters Spider-Man Lois Lane
Category
Previous Chapter Mary Jane Watson

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Cupid thought about and then thought some more. Clark and Mary Jane would be a good couple because of who they were but so was Peter and Lois. Lois might be a two years older than Peter but she needed someone who basically teach her that ambition and career would make for an empty life ahead of her. Lois would learn that she could have a family and still have a career. She just needed to learn that.

Peter would learn to be more responsible and have a very sexy brunette that would help him out with her connections. Lois was more mature than Mary Jane in mentally being able to work with Spiderman secretly to help the city. If she just happened to get the headline all the better. Lois might not be a redhead but it would prove to be interesting when she learned Peter's spider secret.


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colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
Evva - 7/17/2017 6:33 AM
cool
extreme1 - 7/16/2017 10:26 PM
Evva, I can read it fine.
Evva - 7/16/2017 9:20 PM
Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884



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