Title

Killgrave tests out his new slave

by The Comedian
Storyline Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D.
Characters Purple Man
Category Marvel Television
Previous Chapter May is physically transformed

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Deep inside her suddenly much more youthful and feminine body, Melinda May wanted to scream bloody murder. She wasn't one for emotional displays almost ever, but this bastard deserved it. Just looking at him she could see every single bone she could break in his body, and all she would have to do is...

"Now, Melinda, what should your first order be? Ah, yes, of course. Get on your knees."

"Yes, Master," she replied almost automatically. Even her voice had been changed, sounding higher-pitched and breathier than it ever had when she was actually the age she looked now.

And when she knelt down, in spite of a futile desire to resist the command, a sudden rush of pleasure overtook the former agent's mind. Not sexual pleasure, but something even deeper, a pure satisfaction at having followed an order. What was going on? This wasn't...

"Who do you serve, Melinda?"

"You, Master."

The first wave of pleasure had barely subsided befoe another one hit her, and the parts of her mind that insisted that she was still Agent Melinda May and could still find a way out of this felt themselves slipping away.

"Good girl."

And why wouldn't they? Hurting her master would make Melinda a bad girl, and she wanted nothing more than to be good. She would protect him from bad people who wanted to hurt him, and please him any way she can. She wasn't a S.H.I.E.L.D. agent anymore, and never would be again. And why would she? Her new life was so much better.

Melinda watched as her master unzipped the fly of his pants, a sense of longing and eagerness starting to build up in her very core.

"I believe you know what to do next," he remarked, expectantly and just the slightest bit amused.

She gave a simple, compliant nod before setting to work on his increasingly erect member. Some orders really didn't need to be spelled out.


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ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 6:32 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check out the message board.
colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.



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