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Something else

by Junketh71
Storyline Master PC 2.9
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As Emma sat down before the Master PC, she thought about what did she want to do to Kitty Pryde. Did she really want the little annoyance in her life?

Hmm, little. Emma had a wicked idea. She quickly typed:

- Subconsciously, Kitty Pryde has always felt overwhelmed by my beauty and intelligence, and so she increasingly turned to food for comfort, until she was finally happy in her role as the cafeteria lady. - And then Emma pressed ENTER.

This time, there was no specific feeling of heat, just a great, but very brief rush that dissapated quickly.  "Interesting," Emma muttered. She closed the Master PC, put into her Amazon-like purse and went to check onto how things changed.

* * *

For Emma, it was easy to find Kitty - all that she had to do was to mentally locate her at first, and then go that way, unseen and unsensed by everyone, cloaked in her improved mental powers (an unexpected perk from Emma's previous mental upgrade). Consequently, Emma was able to find and locate Kitty very quickly - and stare.

Kitty had grown stout, around 50 kg of weight or so. Combining with the fact that now she was about five ft. high as well, the result was bulging out of her grey lunch lady uniform. Her facial features became fattened, coarse, and her eyes had grown dim and almost cold.

"Next!" Katherine Pryde snaped as she gave students their lunches in the school cafeteria with the sort of expertise that Emma had never seen in the original version. "Interesting," she muttered to herself. "What else I can do, I wonder?"


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gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)



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