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Something else

by Junketh71
Storyline Master PC 2.9
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As Emma sat down before the Master PC, she thought about what did she want to do to Kitty Pryde. Did she really want the little annoyance in her life?

Hmm, little. Emma had a wicked idea. She quickly typed:

- Subconsciously, Kitty Pryde has always felt overwhelmed by my beauty and intelligence, and so she increasingly turned to food for comfort, until she was finally happy in her role as the cafeteria lady. - And then Emma pressed ENTER.

This time, there was no specific feeling of heat, just a great, but very brief rush that dissapated quickly.  "Interesting," Emma muttered. She closed the Master PC, put into her Amazon-like purse and went to check onto how things changed.

* * *

For Emma, it was easy to find Kitty - all that she had to do was to mentally locate her at first, and then go that way, unseen and unsensed by everyone, cloaked in her improved mental powers (an unexpected perk from Emma's previous mental upgrade). Consequently, Emma was able to find and locate Kitty very quickly - and stare.

Kitty had grown stout, around 50 kg of weight or so. Combining with the fact that now she was about five ft. high as well, the result was bulging out of her grey lunch lady uniform. Her facial features became fattened, coarse, and her eyes had grown dim and almost cold.

"Next!" Katherine Pryde snaped as she gave students their lunches in the school cafeteria with the sort of expertise that Emma had never seen in the original version. "Interesting," she muttered to herself. "What else I can do, I wonder?"


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colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1
CorruptionCentral - 11/25/2016 3:40 PM
Exidor: Didn't think you were having ago. Thought you were feeling unappreciated on CHYOA & thought I would say I'll be adding there but it will take a while.
extreme1 - 11/24/2016 12:57 PM
I gotta agree with exidor, but then again I'm biased because I have two stories and neither have had anything submitted for them. Whereas Gambit the Pimp has had multiple people work on it (something I'm very thankful for).
exidor455 - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
Not having ago at you CorruptionCentral. I just get the impression that people at CHYOA read stories that the authors put multiple branches into, unlike here where it's more collaborative. I refer to bounce stories back and forth.
gothamalleyviper - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
I know this doesn't apply to anyone outside of the US, but Happy Thanksgiving. (I only you Canadians had yours in October)
CorruptionCentral - 11/24/2016 9:05 AM
Exidor:I've been reading there on & off for ages. I'll get to adding but have the same time issues I do here.



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