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"Magic mirror on the wall, who's the biggest bitch of all?"
Queen Snow White laughed as she lounged on her seat in front of the magic mirror. She was dressed in a white leather bodysuit, along with high-heeled boots, a white leather cloak, and a crown, looking every inch the dominatrix queen she'd become.
She was larger than before. The sin of Gluttony had given her a love of food and drink that had swelled her body to a sexy plumpness, including a jiggly belly, a massive soft ass, and an utterly humongous pair of tits with thick eraser-sized nipples that strained
against her outfit.
"Grimmy, get your queen some cake!" Snow White yelled as she yanked on the leash she held in her hand.
"Y-yes, my queen." Her step-mother whimpered as she tottered towards her mistress with a large cake in her hands. The former Queen Grimhilde was naked except for her old black cowl and a pair of ridiculous high stilletto heels. Well, if you didn't count the
white dog-collar attached to the choke-chain, or the large silver rings that adorned her enhanced nipples or engorged clit, or the white snowflake on her bubble-butt that marked her as Queen Snow's slave.
"MMmm," Snow White cooed as "Grimmy" fed her rich creamy cake. The dominatrix queen playfully yanked on the tit and clit rings as she ate, causing her slave to moan.
Yes, Snow White needed to save the other princesses... once she finished her cake.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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