Title

Her mind starts to transform

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Sue Storm Red Skull
Category Body Modification Marvel
Previous Chapter Red Skull II

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As the oils began to soak in Sue was finally relaxing.  And why shouldn't she.  For once she didn't have to play mediator between her immature brother Johnny and Reed's moronic friend Ben.  Just thinking abou them put more knots in her muscles. and that's without thinking of Reed.

Reed.  Her husband the brilliant scientist who seemed married to his work then her.  Always concerned more with his latest experiment or invention.
As the salon team moved to her hair Sue realizes something wasn't right.  Why was she thinking this?  She loved her teammates.  They were her family.  Yet with each snip of her long gorgeous blonde locks a piece of her that loved her team was cut away as well.
And not just her team.  Snip after snip her love for all men was cut out of her life until all that was left was a deep hatred for all the men who ever affected her life, good or bad who needed to be punished.  Only womankind could be allowed to rule.
That's when a strange thought came in to her mind.  She kind of sounded like the Red Skull.  Not the crazy Nazi war criminal, but his daughter.  Sue had seen her on TV recently talking about this exact thing and it excited her.  Just the thought of being in her presence made the Invisible Woman wet with anticipation.   
As DeeDee turned Sue around to look at her finished makeover she realized what she needed to do. She would have to change her name though.  With a look like this, she did not want to remain invisible any longer.  No she was now...The Fantastic Butch.  She would need to find her new mistress and show her what she can do for the cause of removing all men from this world so that the new reich of womankind could finally rise up.  And with her new set of muscles and very closely cropped hair she would not need to persuade Sin of her purpose.


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colleem - 12/5/2016 5:21 AM
Master. Question in story board
Master_Kind - 12/4/2016 9:06 PM
Thanks! :)
colleem - 12/4/2016 7:14 AM
Masterkind :) Really like your Idea
extreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PM
I start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???
gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PM
We shall see.
colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1



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