Title

Susan Storm

by clifford.cao
Storyline New U Salon
Characters
Category
Previous Chapter Grand Opening

Community Raiting:

Your Raiting: You must login to rate the chapter


Dee Dee's eyes widened as she saw who the first customer was. Susan Storm, the Invisible Woman. Matron of the Fantastic Four and very first "request" that had been made of her. No doubt here only because of the hypnotic letter she (and most every other super heroine) had been sent a few days ago; it didn't exert any noticeable control over their minds like other hypnotic devices; no, it planted a tiny little suggestion at the back of their minds that slowly bled through their thought process, until they could no longer ignore it.

Like most of New York's criminals, Dee Dee had seen the blond heroine in person before. Most of those times had been only a few minutes long, mind, and the most recent instance had happened more than three years ago... but that wasn't to say that she wasn't going to enjoy this...

The big-titted blonde rubbed her hands, as was the traditional villainous thing to do when a holier-than-thou do-gooder cluelessly stumbled into one's cunning, cunning trap. She held off on the evil laugh, though. General consensus amongst villains these days was that it was best to do those after one's evil plan was complete.

Ding-a-ling.

As soon as she heard the bell above her shop's door tinkling, Dee Dee immediately dropped the scheming smile on her face and replaced it with one of innocent cheer. She'd had plenty of practice before, after all.

The Invisible Woman walked through the door with that typical super heroine air about her - dignified, yet not detached, and clearly optimistic and friendly. It made Dee Dee want to vomit.

But she held it in, and guided the Matron of Marvel toward the closest salon chair and vanity unit. She only half-listened to the blond woman's prattling about the coupon she'd been sent and her uneventful week and her evolving thoughts on personal appearances and whatnot. Jesus Christ, did she mistake this place for a therapist's office?!

(And did these super heroines like to hear themselves talk, or what?!)

Finally, she managed to sit the Invisible Woman down in the chair, cogs already turning in her head. It didn't really matter what Sue wanted; her employer had clearly told her to turn the blonde heroine into:


Next Chapters

Or add your own

SuperStories Wall


Evva - 7/27/2017 10:27 PM
ruleradvent - TAG! (many chapters were updated. And I am opening a topic to discuss about our stories)
colleem - 7/27/2017 11:26 AM
@danknoodle. Nice Master PC version. The first Symbiont story i like because the it is not so brutal. it shows the mind from Venom nicely.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 10:55 AM
Also I feel like we need more Symbiote story. I'm taking suggestion for Symbiote stories and idea.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 10:43 AM
Thanks, I kinda figured before you said so but still. Who knew all you need to do it update it.
Cal512 - 7/27/2017 7:55 AM
Try editing the chapter after you submit them. That usually works for me.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 12:54 AM
This is getting really annoying, I made sure that I had a space between each line and it all stuck together. ??
Gorel - 7/26/2017 4:19 PM
Would love feedback if any.
Danknoodle420 - 7/25/2017 11:24 PM
I got a feeling that I had burned myself out. I literally wrote a story and gave up after that. ??
Evva - 7/25/2017 8:02 AM
Danknoodle420 - try readcomiconline.to It works for every browser, but mini browsers
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 4:23 PM
WW Van Bar is from a story with nothing to do with Werewolves, he is a character for a modern pirate story. I just wanted the worst name possible to make the guy jaded an a fighter.



You must be a member to post to the wall