Ms. Marvel arrives on the scene to aid Maria Hill

by Megumi
Storyline Bimbotech
Characters Maria Hill Ms. Marvel
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A black car pulled into one side of the alley in which Maria waited for Carol Danvers.  She turned to see that a similar car was blocking the other side.    

She’d thought she was well hidden.  This was a strategic mistake. 

She could climb a fire escape and get some high ground.  The only problem was that she would be vulnerable to gunshots.  No her best option was simply to lock the car doors and close the windows.  The car was shield issue; bullet proof, and equipped with air purifiers.  It could serve as a panic room until Ms. Marvel arrives. 

The unmarked cars began to unload some equipment from there trunks. 

Men who looked more like lab technicians than thugs began to set up something that resembled a sound system.  They themselves wore headphones; probably noise blockers 

Maybe they were trying to force her out with loud noise.  She’d heard of such methods being considered as a form of crowd control against protestors.  Even sleep deprivation at Guantanamo was accomplished simply by playing music at late hours.  Agent Hill went through her glove compartment and found a pair of earplugs, surely they didn’t think this was going to work. 

After a while she was starting to wonder when they would turn on their equipment when she noticed a light on one of the amplifiers.  The equipment had been running for a few minutes already.  Maria became nervous wondering what this meant. 

She waited a few minutes more wondering when Carol would arrive.  Then she noticed the clock on her radio.  She hadn’t waited a few minutes she had only waited a few seconds.  She watched the clock carefully and counted to fifty before another second passed.  What was this?  She counted again, this time reaching 82 before a single second passed. 

Up in the sky she saw someone flying towards her.  It was Ms Marvel, but she was flying so slowly.   

A loud speaker came on.  “Ms. Marvel.  Your ally, Maria Hill, is currently in an altered state of consciousness.  Pulling her out too quickly will cause brain damage.   

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
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