Title

Ms. Marvel arrives on the scene to aid Maria Hill

by Megumi
Storyline Bimbotech
Characters Maria Hill Ms. Marvel
Category
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A black car pulled into one side of the alley in which Maria waited for Carol Danvers.  She turned to see that a similar car was blocking the other side.    

She’d thought she was well hidden.  This was a strategic mistake. 

She could climb a fire escape and get some high ground.  The only problem was that she would be vulnerable to gunshots.  No her best option was simply to lock the car doors and close the windows.  The car was shield issue; bullet proof, and equipped with air purifiers.  It could serve as a panic room until Ms. Marvel arrives. 

The unmarked cars began to unload some equipment from there trunks. 

Men who looked more like lab technicians than thugs began to set up something that resembled a sound system.  They themselves wore headphones; probably noise blockers 

Maybe they were trying to force her out with loud noise.  She’d heard of such methods being considered as a form of crowd control against protestors.  Even sleep deprivation at Guantanamo was accomplished simply by playing music at late hours.  Agent Hill went through her glove compartment and found a pair of earplugs, surely they didn’t think this was going to work. 

After a while she was starting to wonder when they would turn on their equipment when she noticed a light on one of the amplifiers.  The equipment had been running for a few minutes already.  Maria became nervous wondering what this meant. 

She waited a few minutes more wondering when Carol would arrive.  Then she noticed the clock on her radio.  She hadn’t waited a few minutes she had only waited a few seconds.  She watched the clock carefully and counted to fifty before another second passed.  What was this?  She counted again, this time reaching 82 before a single second passed. 

Up in the sky she saw someone flying towards her.  It was Ms Marvel, but she was flying so slowly.   

A loud speaker came on.  “Ms. Marvel.  Your ally, Maria Hill, is currently in an altered state of consciousness.  Pulling her out too quickly will cause brain damage.   


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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