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Beta Test

by THISguy
Storyline The Slut Ray
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Eugene Moore emerged from the deepest, darkest part of his mother's basement holding the culmination of his life's work. He had spent the last 12 years developing this single invention. He could have spent that time developing a renewable fuel source, a way to extract water in the desert, or any other number of inventions that could have saved or improved millions of lives.

Instead, Eugene let his bitterness drive his motivation. Growing up, he was always the smart, unpopular kid. The bitterness from being bullied and rejected had turned Eugene into a complete jerk. He had used his intelligence and resources to get revenge on the popular kids during high school. His mean pranks eventually turned dangerous and he was expelled. He didn't really care though, he didn't need college or a diploma to do what he wanted to do with his life.

And now, in his hands, Eugene Moore held The Slut Ray. The Ray shot a beam of a very specialized energy. Any woman hit with the beam would be subject to significant mental and physical changes. Quite simply put, it would change any woman targeted into a raging nymphomaniac with a body that would make a porn star jealous.

Eugene walked outside to test his Slut Ray. He didn't really care who he transformed, as long as his invention worked. He saw a teenage girl jogging down the sidewalk across the street. Eugene took aim and pulled the trigger. A beam of light shot out of the Slut Ray and hit the jogger in the back.

She slowed to a stop as a warmth spread from the spot the beam hit her. Her mind became clouded as her body changed. Her sports bra stretched around her expanding breasts. Her ass swelled and stretched her spandex running shorts. Her hair fell out of her ponytail and the golden locks cascaded down her back. The fog in her mind lifted and was replaced with pure lust.

She saw the mail man two houses down closing the door to a mailbox. She charged toward him, throwing her clothes off along the way, her tackled him to the ground and started clawing and ripping at his pants.

Eugene watched from a distance as the young girl raped the mailman. He walked back inside of his house and packed for a trip. He was going to go to California and cause some really high profile mayhem.

Several hours later, Eugene's flight landed at LAX. He exited the plane and started to wander the streets of LA. He heard a commotion in the distance, he looked over and saw the perfect opportunity to use his Slut Ray


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Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 12:56 PM
Replied Colleem!
colleem - 1/23/2017 11:50 AM
Helen-troy :) have a Question on the Massage Board
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 9:32 AM
As soon as I brought the Corruptor over, my laptop key board went ka-put, so Don't expect much until next week when I get a new one.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over. Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site? I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol. Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Helen-Troy Understandable, it read to me as satire. But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare). Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char



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