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Beta Test

by THISguy
Storyline The Slut Ray
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Eugene Moore emerged from the deepest, darkest part of his mother's basement holding the culmination of his life's work. He had spent the last 12 years developing this single invention. He could have spent that time developing a renewable fuel source, a way to extract water in the desert, or any other number of inventions that could have saved or improved millions of lives.

Instead, Eugene let his bitterness drive his motivation. Growing up, he was always the smart, unpopular kid. The bitterness from being bullied and rejected had turned Eugene into a complete jerk. He had used his intelligence and resources to get revenge on the popular kids during high school. His mean pranks eventually turned dangerous and he was expelled. He didn't really care though, he didn't need college or a diploma to do what he wanted to do with his life.

And now, in his hands, Eugene Moore held The Slut Ray. The Ray shot a beam of a very specialized energy. Any woman hit with the beam would be subject to significant mental and physical changes. Quite simply put, it would change any woman targeted into a raging nymphomaniac with a body that would make a porn star jealous.

Eugene walked outside to test his Slut Ray. He didn't really care who he transformed, as long as his invention worked. He saw a teenage girl jogging down the sidewalk across the street. Eugene took aim and pulled the trigger. A beam of light shot out of the Slut Ray and hit the jogger in the back.

She slowed to a stop as a warmth spread from the spot the beam hit her. Her mind became clouded as her body changed. Her sports bra stretched around her expanding breasts. Her ass swelled and stretched her spandex running shorts. Her hair fell out of her ponytail and the golden locks cascaded down her back. The fog in her mind lifted and was replaced with pure lust.

She saw the mail man two houses down closing the door to a mailbox. She charged toward him, throwing her clothes off along the way, her tackled him to the ground and started clawing and ripping at his pants.

Eugene watched from a distance as the young girl raped the mailman. He walked back inside of his house and packed for a trip. He was going to go to California and cause some really high profile mayhem.

Several hours later, Eugene's flight landed at LAX. He exited the plane and started to wander the streets of LA. He heard a commotion in the distance, he looked over and saw the perfect opportunity to use his Slut Ray


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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