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Iron Man stared at the pile of items of power on his desk, and sighed. “Might as well get them organized,” he thought. He picked up the Worthy hammers and stacked them in one corner of his office. The Darkhold, Book of Parallax, Book of Oa, and
Book of the Black he stacked on a shelf behind his desk, next to a First Edition Mark Twain. The CDs he set near his computer, and the rest he simply put into shelves in his desk.
He then sat back down, put his face in his hands, and groaned softly.
“Well,” he said, “Let’s look at this logically. I am now the most powerful person in the history of… well, ever. And all the items are bonded to me, so I don’t ever have to worry about them being stolen.”
He tapped his computer idly, trying to think. “I shouldn’t use them. There’s too much risk of losing control…”
Namor’s words rang in his head, however. He knew there was a lot he could do. But after the disastrous Civil War, which had nearly ruined anything resembling a community that superheroes had, did he have the right?
The questions burned in his mind. Should he use them? Should he find a way to lock them away forever?
He held up the disc with the Master PC program. “It would be so easy…” he said softly. He could make himself immune to the mind-controlling or soul-corrupting effects of the items, allowing him to use the power freely…
“NO!” he said, putting the disc down. “No, I can’t.” He rubbed his temples, groaning. He stared around at the items, wondering and wondering…
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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