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The Merchant saw the first person to arrive, was not a villain like he hoped and tried for. It was a hero, normally a force of order and law. Yet even this could be used for the Chaos which the Merchant wanted.
The hero looked at them and asked, "These can't be the real thing, they're safe..."
"On my table, replaced with look-a-likes. Of course if you want to buy something here, you can have the infinite powers of the items here. What would you like to buy? Cause I'm expecting a lot of people to come by. Doom, Loki, Osborne, Sinister..." said the
Merchant as he held up the Infinity Gauntlet, but to bait the hook as much as to use the gems stones to make sure his chaos could occur.
"How much for the lot, everything you have?" asked the hero as they looked at them.
"A hundred bucks. Pricing them to go. I'll even include a box which should hold all of them." said the Merchant, smiling as the bills hit his hand. What he had not told the hero was the fact the items would return to this hero, either in his hands or in his
home no matter where it might be at the moment. Especially just in time for the hero to use them by accident. They would disappear from who ever the hero gives them to the moment their attention and/or eyes were off them.
'Pleasure doing business with you, as the box was packed.
The hero picked up the ordinary looking cardboard box, as we find the hero is...
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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