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Eiyio V, Once a prosperous world filled with potential to be a great space-faring civilization, but during the blackest night their planet, like many others, had their graves used for recruits in the attack against Oa. Lacking heroes of their own their
planet fell to the black rings. When the black lanterns were destroyed Eiyio V became a graveyard and the black rings littered the deserted streets. After years of silence the star that gave life to the system began to die, not in a whimper but as supernova.
The fireball expanded rapidly engulfing Eiyio V disintegrating everything. Without their power battery, the black rings were no longer indestructible and burned along with the planet they killed. The black energy held within the myriad of rings exploded out
through the cosmos thanks to the supernova. The black energy bombarded everything in its path leaving a swath of destruction in its wake. Unknown to Star Sapphires the planet Zamaron's orbit put it in front of the destruction.
The black energy burned the planet despite the Star Sapphires intervention. With all of their powers united to shield themselves they managed to eventually stop the energy, but the damage had been done. Their planet was scorched and many of their sisters had
fallen but worst of all the power battery was damaged. Cracks formed in the battery slowly at first but quickly spread at alarming speed. The violet energy within began to shine through as the cracks widened unable to contain the power. The battery fell to
pieces reduced to rubble and the Sapphire's lost their corps. Their rings flickered before following the battery and crumbling. The predator entity watched as the Star Sapphires began to fall unable to survive without their rings on this scorched planet. It
snarled feeling each of them pass. With the corps all but gone it saw a single power ring laying upon the ground, it believed it to be the only one left. It sprinted over inspecting the ring, it was a black ring that survived the nova. The entity knew what
it had to do, it couldn't allow love to fall, the predator gave its power to convert the black ring. It leaped into the ring trying to posses it like it could a living being. Inside the ring the two opposing energies were at war. The ring flashed between glowing
black and violet. The battle ended and the face of the ring turned violet while the band remained black. The predator while victorious had become twisted in the process.It became obsessed with a different part of love's nature lust and had gained the black
energy's desire for domination. The new ring floated in the air returning to life and zipped out of the planet to find a ring bearer capable of rebuilding the all female corps.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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