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Former superman continue suck zatannas cock. Her slutty body was in hot and wet. Her sobs was horny and sexy. "It taste so good in my mounth, i little slut" , - superman fingers down to her pussy. Small bit of former hero voice still was in her head. "I
am must fight with....but it feel so wonderfull ,i am now a sexy girl with plump lips and slutty ass, why i must fight, cocks feel nice. Noo it is not my thoughts, its Zatannas magic" - , superman thinking, that her hands play with her clitoris. "This is her
magic and i can fight with that", - girl thinking as her lips movements becoming like professional blowjobs. Her pink nails teasing her erect nipples, and new girl suffer in pleasure as she sucking. Her thoughts still tricking by magic of Zatanna :"I almost
recover control, now i should get help of justice league". Zatanna came, girl drinking sperm in happiness as her pussy finish. Her smooth body shaking in her first orgasm of many futures. "At last i recover control now i must run" - He thinking in calm as
her body stand up at knees and her hands draw apart her sweaty ass cheeks and girl say in horny manner, " please fuck this naughty girl, she deserve it". Zatanna laughing, that girl was superman.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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