Title

She steals more

by hyperion
Storyline A new Frightful Four
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Mind Control
Previous Chapter Its so comfy she sleeps in it that night.....her personality changes slowly.

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Susan Richards returned home. She adjusted the crotch of her uniform. She turned to see Ben Grimm watching the news. 

"Looks like another convenience store was hit!" He gruffed chewing on some popcorn.

Johnny Storm nodded, "Yeah, but this time the bills can be tracked. So who is ever hitting these people without seeing the culprit, is gonna get caught."

Sue made a hasty retreat, she exited the building and went invisible. She flew up into the sky on a force-field and moved towards the former "Four Freedom's plaza" along the water, that was now a warehouse. 

She opened the steel door, to reveal dozens of stolen items, and bags of money. "SHIT!" She thought, you've done it now, they're going to track you down. You got too greedy Sue. But she felt so alive, it felt so naughty and yet so right.

Just then a long dormant screen lit up with the face of Bentley Whitman. "Well Mrs. Richards, you've been a bad girl, haven't you!"

"Meet me at the following quadrants, and I will help you. If you do not, the world will know your shame and evil!"


All Sue could do was nod, she flew away, disgusted and scared. She felt that the Wizard was a low-life creep, and she could pop his head, but something in her told her to listen to him. To follow...his...his instructions...


This is exactly what the Wizard's nano-bytes were doing, dumbing her powers down so she wouldn't be a problem, and allowing her to accept her place and his side-kick and well....partner, in more ways than one. In his lair, he had a mechanized version of a sexy magician's apprentice, purple in color, she would be his "apprentice", in no time.


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ESchorcho - 4/26/2016 8:17 AM
mcont44, any update on Cutter Creek?
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2016 10:12 PM
Will try and get 2 new stories up son. Plans for a Marvel one and a Sailor Moon one.
gothamalleyviper - 4/25/2016 7:54 PM
Sorry if this last one isn't up to snuff, voice on phone upload.
extreme1 - 4/25/2016 7:25 PM
C. King Corruption is by far my favorite type of erotica, but non-erotic...I prefer corruption, but I got no problem with redemption (My favorite superhero is Gambit and redemption is pretty much the thing that motivates him).
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2016 6:47 PM
In erotica: Corruptio In regular things: Redmption
Meddler - 4/25/2016 6:14 PM
C.King, actually I take it back. If it's executed properly, I think a redemption story would be pretty great.
Meddler - 4/25/2016 6:07 PM
C.King, I don't feel strongly either way, partly because I think the execution can be far more important than the subject matter, but Redemption might be nice since there's not very much of that.
Darth Elsa - 4/25/2016 4:59 PM
Got it up much earlier than expected. SHould have a meanest bitch one today or wednesday at the latest
Darth Elsa - 4/25/2016 2:43 PM
Will have a chapter for Rise of the Shameless around 10pm
C.King - 4/25/2016 12:54 PM
Informal Survey: Which do you love more Redemption, Corruption or love both equal amounts?



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