Title

Scarlet Witch

by LordPartanx
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Scarlet Witch
Category Bimboization Marvel Body Modification
Previous Chapter The giggly receptionist for the salon.

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This was a true challenge.  A mutant that literally changed the world.  A smirk comes across Dee Dee's face thinking how fast overhead would go down with Scarlet Witch on the staff.  It is brilliant!!!  Now this girl is going to have to have a subtle push in the right direction.  


Suzy giggles and greets Wanda at the door.  "What can I help you with today?  We have a special going on for a free facial with any full body massage today."

Wanda looks down at the bubbly blond Suzy almost sure she has met her before.  "I many just came for a haircut and a facial.  maybe a massage would go well with that."  

Dee Dee steps up with a smile.  "Since you are looking For so many services maybe i can offer you the all day spa package.  This includes all that you were looking for plus a makeover and full use of the spa area.  Want to go out on that special date now is the time."

As Wanda blushes at the idea of a special date she thought.  It has been so long since I gathered up the courage to ask my new teammate, Iron Fist, out.  He is smart and handsome, even quirky sometimes.  Maybe it will be nice to look the best I can for him.  Looking up to Dee Dee, "Sure give me all you have." 

The smile on Dee Dee's face just grew knowing how much she would enjoy this.  "Right this way then and we will set you up for a day that will change your life GUARANTEED."


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colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
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Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
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Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
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The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
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Evva, I can read it fine.
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Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884



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