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Storm's trailer banged open and she strode out, her massive black body squeezed into tight black leather, accompanied by intimidating stud-covered gloves and belt and large steel-toed boots.
"Here, Kitty-Kitty," Storm called out as she stalked past the trailers, idly swinging a chain. "Here, Kitty-Kitty. Mama has some nice cream for her kitty."
She sighed and continued her search.
"Mama needs her lovin', Kitty."
Emma Frost pouted as she waddled through the park.
No one respected her. That bitch Lola didn't respect her, that dyke Jubilee didn't respect her, that thug Storm didn't respect her, even Mr. Summers didn't respect even. No matter how much he liked to pound her ass.
"Jerks," Emma sniffed.
She needed a shoulder to cry on and there was only one person for that.
"Hey, Jeannie, you in there?" Emma asked as she knocked on her best friend's door. "It's Emma."
"Ooooo, that's it, babe," Jubilee moaned as she squirmed on Lola's face. "OOoooo, lick Auntie Jubes clean. OOooooo, yesss!"
Meanwhile Kat thrust a black strap-on up Lola's snatch, causing the girl to squeal around Jubes' cunt.
"Ohhhhh, take it, babycakes!" Kat moaned. "Fuck my dick!"
Lola was in heaven. At that moment she didn't care if this was real or not. She just wanted them to keep fucking her!
Lola's eyes went wide as a panicked voice popped into her head.
*Wolverine, it's, like, Charlize, I mean it's Professor X! Omigawd, this is so totally frustrating!*
*What's going on?* Lola whimpered as the two bikerchicks still fucked her.
*You still remember the X-Men, right?*
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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