Title

Not alone

by Shendude
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Ms. Marvel Spider-Man
Category Marvel M/F Mind Control Body Modification
Previous Chapter Ms. Marvel

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Peter's jaw dropped. Increasing Ms Marvel's bust-size and libido while making her totally adore him and always able to find him was one thing (well, four things), but being confronted by the reality of it was another. More significantly, while making his fantasy of Carol servicing him come true, without realizing it, he'd gone and made the other part of the fantasy true; of their being not one but five of her.

And all five were hovering in front of his window! One wore her original midriff-baring costume, another he classic black costume, a third wore her Binary costume, the fourth wore her new Captain Marvel costume, while the fifth wore street clothes. All five had had their tops destroyed by their expanding breasts, yet showed no inclination to cover up their awe-inspiring assets. "Classic" Carol knocked on the window.

"Can we come in, Pete?" she said. Peter gulped and let them in. There was an awkward silence for a moment, and then "Binary" Carol spoke up.

"We know you did this to us, Peter. Don't know how we know, or how you did it, but we know it was you."

"it's okay, though," said "Original" Carol. "We like...no, we love what you've done to us...what you've done FOR us."

Pete stared. "Seriously?"

They nodded in unison. "Seriously," said "Civilian" Carol. "It's probably a side-effect of the transformation, but I wouldn't dream of going back to the way we were before."

More nodding, and then "Captain" Carol declared, "Now that we've cleared that up, Peter, we were wondering..."


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C.King - 4/24/2014 9:54 AM
Good Job, Kirayoshi. Good Job. I'll see if I have a story to continue it.
gothamalleyviper - 4/23/2014 7:41 PM
One short, one longer, but hope people provide feed back
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.



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