Title

Not alone

by Shendude
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Characters Ms. Marvel Spider-Man
Category Marvel M/F Mind Control Body Modification
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Peter's jaw dropped. Increasing Ms Marvel's bust-size and libido while making her totally adore him and always able to find him was one thing (well, four things), but being confronted by the reality of it was another. More significantly, while making his fantasy of Carol servicing him come true, without realizing it, he'd gone and made the other part of the fantasy true; of their being not one but five of her.

And all five were hovering in front of his window! One wore her original midriff-baring costume, another he classic black costume, a third wore her Binary costume, the fourth wore her new Captain Marvel costume, while the fifth wore street clothes. All five had had their tops destroyed by their expanding breasts, yet showed no inclination to cover up their awe-inspiring assets. "Classic" Carol knocked on the window.

"Can we come in, Pete?" she said. Peter gulped and let them in. There was an awkward silence for a moment, and then "Binary" Carol spoke up.

"We know you did this to us, Peter. Don't know how we know, or how you did it, but we know it was you."

"it's okay, though," said "Original" Carol. "We like...no, we love what you've done to us...what you've done FOR us."

Pete stared. "Seriously?"

They nodded in unison. "Seriously," said "Civilian" Carol. "It's probably a side-effect of the transformation, but I wouldn't dream of going back to the way we were before."

More nodding, and then "Captain" Carol declared, "Now that we've cleared that up, Peter, we were wondering..."


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January - 12/20/2014 2:59 AM
I love this Medieval Madness line. Might think of trying to add on to it, but I've never posted an episode on this site...
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.



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