Title

How did Doom corrupt Sue?

by Anzaleth
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Doctor Doom Fantastic Four Invisible Woman
Category Corruption M/F Marvel Mind Control
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Doom had uncovered a book of magic that included a ritual that unleashed a person's most repressed desires.

Susan Richards was the most pure and perfect heroine, wife, and mother imaginable, who selflessly sacrificed her own needs for the good of her family and the world. But deep down, there was a part of her that wanted to put her own pleasures first, who wanted to be rich and fell-fucked and have others fulfill HER every whim.

After acquiring a couple of hairs from Susan's head, Doom had performed the ritual and awoke a stirring inside Susan Richard's soul.

Why should she be a superheroine when she could be a queen instead?


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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